Share yours :)
By ryshawneo
@ryshawneo (405)
Philippines
June 12, 2008 9:58pm CST
Hi! I can't think of any to discuss with. So, I'll start a discussion regarding when do you start writing poems. And, if you can share one of yours. I started writing poems back in high school. I was inspired by a friend, she is a good poet.:) I'll share one of my poems.
Beside the River!
I'm sitting beside the river,
looking at myself on the water.
Smiling as if it doesn't matter,
though I am trying harder.
I slowly whisper,
What is life without your love?
What's the use of these running water?
Without you by my side..
I close my eyes,
with tears slowly falling down.
I open my eyes,
with you standing before the sun.
It feels like I'm in heaven,
when you came close to me.
The clouds and the angels,
are there to sing with me.
I have realized, it was just a dream,
that I could only wish to make it come true.
I do not feel any fear,
Because, I know, I LOVE YOU!
3 responses
@william2233 (225)
• Concord, California
14 Jun 08
Very nice poem, I tried to list mine couldn't Oops.
My rating must be 500 or more.
Look me up on writing.com
as william2
many, many poems here
@ryshawneo (405)
• Philippines
17 Jun 08
it's ok if u can't hehehe.. i won't take it from you.. hehehe.. i just wanna share mine :) thank you for the compliment :)
@moondancer (7431)
• United States
13 Jun 08
This is a beautiful poem with a lot of meaning. Thank you for sharing it with us. I to have written poems since an early age. I unfortunately don't have one handle to share with you.
@sunshinegirl1 (436)
• United States
13 Jun 08
A nice poem. I have written one poem on Helium and I kind of liked it. Keep writing you're good.
@ryshawneo (405)
• Philippines
17 Jun 08
hey! thanks for the compliment :) i wrote that with my nose bleeding.. not literally :) heheh :0