POEM: Noise Of War
By welsen
@welsen (89)
Philippines
September 28, 2008 10:31am CST
Noise Of War by me...my own poem. Luckily it was nominated at poetry.com poem of the year 2007. Won editor choice award.
Noise of War - Welbert Senina
It is louder than rock music
A maximum volume of component
If i can hear it always
It can make me peaceless
Where is the silence?
You know what i mean
Where is the silence?
You know what i mean
A silence, a silence
For mind, for life, and for the world
I need a chirp of birds
I need a soft wave of trees
I need a flows of the river
We need a fulfillment
In our time simply a silence,
A silence for peace
Where is the silence?
We're looking, so noisy outside
No ending...
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3 responses
@angelia286 (2029)
• Singapore
12 Nov 08
Nice poem!
You are good in your literacy work, ever thought of getting it published? That poem just about sums up everything that happens during the war, the suffering of the people, be it mentally or physically.
Keep up the good work, and let the poems flow! Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem with us. I can see why it was nominated as the poem of the year for year 2007. You deserved it.
Well, take care and happy mylotting!!
Do I have the permission to reproduce this in my blog??
@welsen (89)
• Philippines
13 Nov 08
Thank you very much for commenting, thank you very much also for appreciating my poem.By the way, what about my poem you said my poem is wonderful, yes because i put my soul to it and work hard myself.About the permission to publish, yes sure you can republish it and thank you very much already in advance, it's my honor also to publish it by others.But there if there is somebody would ask when it is written.It is written on 2007.Ok happy my lotting too, also taker and God bless you.
@angelia286 (2029)
• Singapore
14 Nov 08
Thanks! I have published it in my blog. You might be interested to take a look at it at http://angel-tears86.blogspot.com/
@welsen (89)
• Philippines
21 Nov 08
Hello. can you edit a little 2 my poem in the we need a fullfilment line ..We need a fullfilment of dreams. might be.Also me i was wrong.Thank you very.Can you add me also to my blog at blogspot. Welsen is my id...i dont know how to add yet their.Pls. If you want i have also some poems their , love poem. www.welsen.blogspot.
@julyteen (13252)
• Davao, Philippines
29 Sep 08
great work my friend because your poem is among those nominated by poetry.com 2007, this is a good poem that people will think about what is happening to our world in present times. war is everywhere, why people always engage this horrible situation. we are longing peace and many individuals lost hope if peace will happen again in our world. people are too selfish and greedy that causes this war exist everywhere in the world.