my short writing(could you help me polish it?)

Hello freshrainer, I find your writing so far fine. I just have to do some tweaking ok. Particularly on which part needs to be written in capital and the likes. I am also stating here differently abled instead of disabled because it is the more politically correct term. I hope you find my changes fine. == [b]Dear Sir, I am (Name) of the (Organization). I am writing to tell you that our government needs to set up an agency to provide more job opportunities for the differently abled individuals. With the increase in competition for jobs, it is easy for the government to ignore the needs of these individuals. Admittedly, there has been much improvement has been made for them, for example, the design of many supermarkets and roads has put greatly prioritized their. However, there are a number of things aside from those that needs to be done. Though the maybe different in many ways, they in fact, want to make effective contributions to the society just like any of us, to prove their worth to our country. And one of the suggestions is to train them for free to be productively helpful. So that they too can achieve their dreams and feel good about themselves not just as individuals but citizens of the country. Hoping for a favorable reply from you. Sincerely yours, (Name)[/b][i][/i]

Dear sir, I am writing here to sincerely suggest that the government should found an agency for the disabled to provide more job opportunities for them, and it will be more helpful if they can receive education or vocational training. With the heated employment competition, the demand of the disabled is taken for granted. And although we have made a lot of improvements, such as the special facilities in the supermarkets and roads, there is still room for improvement. In fact, the disabled also want to contribute to the society as much as others, and what they need is an agency that enables them to be trained for the benefit of their vocational career. Your consideration is very much appreciated, and I am looking forward for your reply. Sincerely, Name.