a short basketball player.

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This is a writing by my student. I have to admit that even if you are short ,you also have the potential to become a good basketball player. Now, I have polished the writing, but I really want to know how to improve it further. would you like to help me with this? even one sentence or a word is also enough. thank you --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Peter, my classmate, with big eyes and curly hair, is a very determined boy. You can't imagine that he is judged as the best basketball player this term since he seems so small among the crowd of other players. One year ago when he told us his dream, few believed him. However, he just made it. He was often found on the school playground, basketball in hand, shooting over and over again, sometimes until dark. Even though his coach once told him that he would never succeed considering his height, he just shrugged it off and went on with his practice. It is true that if the dream is big enough, the fact don't counts.