My Sherlock Holmes story! / myLot

India

December 30, 2008 10:26am CST

I had written a story of Sherlock Holmes when I was in school. I have posted it on my blog. Its called "An Interview with Sherlock Holmes" and here is the link: http://satishmania.blogspot.com/2008/10/interview-with-sherlock-holmes.html Read and let me know if you like it.

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creativedreamweaver

@creativedreamweaver (7297)

• United States

30 Dec 08

I found you use of dialogue interesting. You did very well capturing the essence of the characters. What I found missing though was the description and descriptive passages. It was a good piece, but could be made much better by using narrative as well as dialogue.

@satishmania (251)

• India

30 Dec 08

Thanks for reading it! Ya it could be made better. It was written by me for my college magazine 5 years ago. I hope I can write better in future as writing is one of my hobbies.