do you ever think of writing a poem?

Philippines
May 19, 2009 3:12am CST
my life and my all i give to thee in your embrace i want to be smile and i will let you see how much your love are meant to me everyday and everynight loving with you with all my might look and you will see the light baby lets forget our fight all your doubt will be erase underneath my warm embrace time will pass until forever i will never leave you never somehow if i make you cry tell me know i dont know why and hear my word..never again...i'll make you cry. i wrote this poem for my wife if you will get the first letter in each line you will know. what is her name. the question is what is the name of my wife? next one do feel that sometimes you want to write a poem to your love one but you cannot?
3 responses
@phyrre (2317)
• United States
25 May 09
That is such a beautiful poem! I love the way you used her name. I could probably write my fiance a poem...it wouldn't be too hard for me, I don't think, but I don't want to. I mean, sometimes I want to, but I really don't. I think words are very powerful and can express a lot of things, but I'd rather my feelings go unexpressed. For some reason I feel that binding my feelings to words makes them seem diminished, so I do things that show him and it's in the way that I look at him and treat him and when he gives me *that* look back, the one that shows he understands, then I feel good. :) I think that's more powerful than any words I would ever be able to write because I fear that I don't write as well as it would take to get my point across.
1 person likes this
• Philippines
22 May 09
I also wrote a poem to my crush when I was in high school. Our teacher asked everyone of us to write a poem for their loved ones. It so happened that I am madly attracted to him but I can't tell it because he was my best friend. In order to release my feelings, I made a poem especially for him. He was able to read it because our classmates teased me and gave a copy to him.
1 person likes this
@xarex777 (467)
• Philippines
19 May 09
hi nice poem! it's michell bautista right? i also wrote 3 poems for my girlfriend.. when i still have..hehe i think everyone of us can write poems if we are that inspired.. i like expressing my thoughts and feelings to the person whom i really love.. Happy myLotting.. ^_^ nice topic!
1 person likes this