Have you ever wrote a poem?
By JenInTN
@JenInTN (27514)
United States
July 21, 2009 7:44pm CST
I love writing poetry although I only do it every now and again. I think that it's a kind of "release". Some people write poetry for the ones that they love and others keep their poetry under lock and key. I do a little of both. Have you or do you write poetry? Feel free to share your favorite poem here if you like.
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@lelin1123 (15595)
• Puerto Rico
22 Jul 09
I love writing poetry its a passion of mine. I have had a bunch published online and one poem in a book of poetry. Attached below you will find one.
YOUR EYES
As I look into your eyes
I can see the extension of me
As I look into your eyes
I can see the understanding
As I look into your eyes
I can see the courage and strength
As I look into your eyes
I can see your trust and warmth
As I look into your eyes
I can see your love for me!
By
J L Hart
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@JenInTN (27514)
• United States
22 Jul 09
Thank you so much for sharing that. It is great! I have a couple of poems on line as well. I'm not in a book though. I think it would be a great honor to be publishe in a book. Is it a book of your poetry or are you one of more authors? Thanks for the response!
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@lelin1123 (15595)
• Puerto Rico
22 Jul 09
It's one poem in a book of other authors. Have a great evening.
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@snowy22315 (179697)
• United States
22 Jul 09
i ahve written poems but I dont consider myself particularly poetic. I often just
write in free verse. I dont think I understand all of the rules pertaining to poetry. I would rather just write something that I dont consider to be particularly poetic. Writing is something I like to do and find pretty interesting.
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@fruitcakeliz (2639)
• United States
22 Jul 09
But that is the great thing about poetry...there really are no "rules"...many people think that poetry MUST rhyme...or have some kind of meter...but poetry is just a flowing of words to express or describe a particular feeling or idea...if it happns to rhyme or have a particular meter to it so be it.
I remember one of the hardest assignments i ever had in school...we were studying poetry and were assigned to write a rhyming poem....do you know how hard it is to A) write a poem on demand, and B) write one that rhymes?
And to top it off, we had to get up in front of the class and read them aloud on the day they were due! talk about misery for a teenager! Most of the ones my classmates submitted were more along the lines of limericks *lol*...
I actually still have mine in my notebook of poetry, i will share it with ya'll, if you promise not to make fun of it (and keep in mind that i was like 15 years old when i wrote it!)
My Life
My life has never been very exciting
Most of it was spent trying to fit in
Invisible, into the wood work blending
Feeling like i have committed some sin
I have made my home in many places
No where i have ever lived has felt right
Friends have come and gone, so many faces
Hoping something better would come into sight
Then came you, making my life worth while
Though only in soul, not body we are together
Just hearing your voice make me brightly smile
Don't you know? i will love you forever?
I wrote this poem, bad though it may be
Just to let you know, how much you mean to me
I always REALLY hated the lasy stanza, but if i remember correctly, the poem was required to be 14 lines long for credit *l*
@JenInTN (27514)
• United States
22 Jul 09
Hi snowy! She's right about poetry not really having any rules. Unless you are trying to write a Haiku or something. I really enjoy writing as well. It was my first passion. Thanks for responding!
Thanks for sharing your poem from school! I think it's great you still have it. I would love to still have some of the things I have written. They have been lost here and there throughout the years.
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@se7enthbird (8307)
• Philippines
22 Jul 09
not yet, and i dont think that i have a talent for that har har har. i think i suck on putting words together, i also suck with rhymes. when me and my wife are still dating i wrote a lot of love letters and she wrote a lot for me as well. but poems? i think you really have to have talent to be able to make one. i think my talent is eating har har har joke.
@nanajanet (4436)
• United States
22 Jul 09
Only funny ones because I am not talented at serious ones. My daughter has written some beautiful ones that have won awards and some published but does not do it any longer. Too bad, she was good at it.
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@lazeebee (5461)
• Malaysia
22 Jul 09
Hi Jen, I sometimes write poems for a number of reasons - joy, sorrow, anxiety. It's like I need to find a way to express myself. It's only during these moments of feelings that words flow; other than that, it's quite difficult for me to write a poem.
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@Opal26 (17679)
• United States
22 Jul 09
Hey Jen! I have written quite a few poems in my life and they
are actually under my real name on Poetry.Com! I even had
an opportunity to have them published in their Book of Poems!
I think I have about 6 of them on their site! It's been many
years since I have actually written anything. I was quite
young when I wrote these and in a very "dark" place! I was
in "love" and "heartbroken"! You know how that goes, but the
poetry was pretty good and even my English Professor in College
said that I should write so it must have been pretty good
since she was a writer too!
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@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
22 Jul 09
I am not a poet but I love to lay down my forms in abstract poetic form. Luckily poetry has changed much since the Romantic, Victorian and Elizabethan era. I have just published a book of poem. You can preview it here:
http://www.lulu.com/content/paperback-book/mirrors/7281815
I also love the HAiku form (5-7-5 syllable) three liners.
[u]Transparent Love
[/u]
I have always feared water bodies
Have loved to sit and watch though
It was always fun
The ripples with mystery moves
The wind forming and changing the patterns
At times untamed getting out of the groove
The ripples at times touched my feet only to go back
It couldn't dare, it never had
There was unruliness and there was pattern
The pattern of nature, the pattern of life.
This time is different though
The water is no more fun
No wind, no challenges, no madness
I could see the bottom of the water
Still, emotionless, blatant and transparent
Not a single pattern, no mystery, no ripples
Does water get sad as well?
Or it's the nature - I wondered.
I could see the bottom
The bottom I never could see but always have wished to
The hues of blacks, greens, browns, yellows, not so yellows
Metamorphosed infinitely, a feel of heaviness and unexplored bitterness
The colors have a story
An untold story - I tried to unfold
It was endless, a story of grime, dirt, sarcasm
I saw the loves, guilts, jitters, cheats, I saw life
I couldn't take it anymore
I came back.
Surprisingly it felt peaceful
I have always wanted transparent love.
[i](C) MouD
August12, 2008[/i]
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@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
22 Jul 09
Please do share your lovely poems dear. I will await that...
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@JenInTN (27514)
• United States
22 Jul 09
Wonderful mimpi! I can't wait to check out your book. ok..here's one of mine.
A face. A place.
A time once known.
A million lives to call my own.
The mountains call me home by name
as I wander the western plains.
The ocean whispers in my ear as snow
flakes gather on my hair.
I twirl my finger in the sand as life
goes on upon lush land.
There is no group to call my own and
family has long been gone. I'm lost.
forgotten. Never known. These fears that
call my heart their own
I wonder where I'm supposed to be and will
that place be right for me.
As for now I'll carry on and listen for my
special song.It may lead me to my place where
I can finally show my face.
@zed_k4 (17589)
• Singapore
23 Jul 09
That's a talent you've got there. I love writing short poems, simple poems at that. But I don't mind creating a long one, only that it might take a bit of time to complete.
I love to read others work too. So if you have any poems projected anywhere, send me the link. I'd love to read it..
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@JenInTN (27514)
• United States
23 Jul 09
Hi zed! I snuck my most recent poem in response 12 of this discussion. Here's the one i wrote just before it. It's called Spring Nights.
The sun goes down and darkness falls.
With it's scent it always calls.
I let my hair fall down my back and smile at the breeze that kissed my neck.
Diamonds fleck the midnight sky and make me feel so rich inside.
The grass is soft beneath my feet as I dance between the trees.
All the life that's never seen is at this moment watching me.
As the sun begins to rise,I feel like I am energized.
So through the day I'll patiently wait until my next spring night escape.
It's a little shorter than the other one..but it was fun to write.
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@Little_Stormy (6883)
• United States
22 Jul 09
I've been writing poetry since I was 9 years old... that's been a long time now. I used to put my writing on a poetry board online and every now then I found my poems on other people's web pages stating that they had written them.. I have since taken all of my work down and I no longer publicly display my poetry.
But I love reading poetry :)
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@Little_Stormy (6883)
• United States
23 Jul 09
I did have mine copyrighted.. however the laws, 10 years ago (and probably still today) have/had so many loop holes in it, that one word change makes it impossible to say that it is yours that is covered by the copyright.. I'm not sure if the laws have changed or not but I mainly write for my own viewing (sometimes close friends) only.
@dawnald (85146)
• Shingle Springs, California
22 Jul 09
I've written a couple. Here are two in my "serious poetry day" discussion along with poems from other people here:
http://www.mylot.com/w/discussions/1938990.aspx
@celticeagle (165922)
• Boise, Idaho
22 Jul 09
I write poetry occasionally. I do it more for closure in a romantic situation. I even submitted one for a contest one time. Wasn't very good and I certainly don't think I have a gift for it or anything. I do try new things and that is one I try when the mood strikes. Thank goodness that isn't very often.
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@celticeagle (165922)
• Boise, Idaho
22 Jul 09
My journaling does this for me too. I think we all have a way of expressing our feelings that is easiest for us.
@tomjoad (551)
• Philippines
22 Jul 09
nice topic! yes i used to write poems. i do it very rarely though but i'm very proud of my work. once i get a really heavy surge of inspiration, i grab my pen and paper and write what i feel. i remember the last time i was really in love with a girl, when i courted her, i handed to her the poem that i wrote. she cried and she loved it. i guess i could say i do write some good poems but it takes me years and years before i get that some kind of inspiration. at present, i think i have only around 4 poems all in all. i hope i'll be writing more in the future though!
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@tomjoad (551)
• Philippines
23 Jul 09
thanks jenin! yeah she did fall in love with me through that poem. but later on she broke my heart! but that's another story. anyway, i would love to read samples of your poems. :-) are your topics mainly about love? or is it about something else? how many poems have you written so far? i'm sure they're all great!
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
22 Jul 09
Hi Jen!
Though I do not consider myself a poet, yet sometimes a make few attempts to write something to reveal my hidden emotions. I have tried some of the poems on Associated Contents and to my pleasant surpise some of the dear friends have appreciated the same. You can have a look at my latest poem(s):
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1959392/beautiful_flowers.html?cat=10
and
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1875225/my_thoughts.html?cat=10
Would like to know about your reactions on my poems.
Thanks
Deepak
@dpk262006 (58676)
• Delhi, India
22 Jul 09
Hi Jen!
Many thanks for your kind words of appreciation about my poems. I feel delighted to read your comments.
Deepak!
@anniefannie (1737)
• United States
22 Jul 09
no i never was much of a writer so i don't think any one would read any of mine
@anniefannie (1737)
• United States
25 Jul 09
thanks,yes,i have been felling better i still can't go dancing yet.lol hope you have agood week end
@rosyevening (270)
• India
23 Jul 09
its very lovely to hear that you love to write poetry , but truely speaking i have never tried in this part as i become very confused about the tittle, rhymes and powerful and charming words to be use ,, i can try if you will help me to start me in writting a poem ..will you ?
@minhminh0604 (342)
• United States
22 Jul 09
I am not good at literature at all.
Although I love to read and listen to poems, it is very difficult for me to make one of my own.
I remember that I made one when I was a kid.
That is my first and only poem as well.
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@happy_phantom (85)
• United States
23 Jul 09
I tend to read poetry, not write it, though I have in the past. There is an elegance to a poem well written and striking to the reader. I've had a professor that said that poetry is the highest form of writing. Those who can't write poetry, write short stories, and those who can't write short stories, write novels. Humorous and while not the rule there is a certain truth to it. A poem can convey all that a novel can and its brevity lends it power that the novel can never quite obtain.
That said I think I've only ever written one poem that came close to doing that. Since then I haven't written any poetry. Perhaps one day I'll go at it again, until then I'll stick to my short stories and novels.
@JenInTN (27514)
• United States
23 Jul 09
I love writing short stories. I have tried a few novels but I get another idea in my head and start on it, never finishing the first..lol...One day. I have a new stradegy the next time I start one though. I do enjoy writing poetry to though. Thanks for the input.