My love for you.. / myLot

Philippines

October 10, 2010 5:44am CST

it's a poem written for someone really special sometime in the year 2000. I love you As much as you love me. I need you As much as you need me. My love for you will never last. I'll be with you no matter what. You'll be in my heart wherever I go, And my feelings for you will continue to grow. To be with you Is what I have wished for. And my love for you Is worth fighting for. I'll be by your side wherever you go, To give you support in everything you do. My love for you will be lasting and will never be through, Till the end of time I'll be loving you.

4 responses

22katie22

@22katie22 (93)

• Mauritius

23 Nov 10

I think you've made a mistake.. The sentence " my love for you will never last" doesn't go well with the rest of the poem :) .. Otherwise, i like it!!

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chinkai28

@chinkai28 (114)

• Philippines

23 Nov 10

Thanks a lot for your comment katie, I just can't find the right words how to say I will love him forever...that lines' meaning to me. "will never last" actually meant "will never end" that's how I thought it was (lol) funny me! As i read the line now meaning is more like "my love for him will not last long" (OMG) when what I meant is otherwise. Thank you so much for liking it...

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fourjems08

@fourjems08 (550)

• Philippines

26 Nov 10

Yeah, I noticed that mistake too. But the same thing here, it is a lovely poem. I like it. It clearly shows how deep and strong your feelings are for that person. How lucky he is!

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chinkai28

@chinkai28 (114)

• Philippines

28 Nov 10

thank you so much fourjems for liking it... Love really is a complicated feeling that sometimes words are not enough to explain how you really feel about that one special person.. But surely love is one great feeling...so keep loving ;)

wowstephanie

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2 Dec 10

Thats nice

chinkai28

@chinkai28 (114)

• Philippines

3 Dec 10

Thanks for appreciating...

zapatee

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