My daily poem: "Today"
@littlefranciscan (18327)
United States
November 11, 2012 6:54am CST
Today:
Trickling through the curtains with its predictable promptness
The morning star is letting out a portion of its brightness
I'm wrestling with my blankets as I am battling the invasion
Only a few minutes more and I'll be part of this day's equation.
Oh the mystery of our breathing and the mystery of our being
We collide with all the elements to create what we are seeing
The outcome of our living becomes stimulus for a reaction
We can be the source of peace or be cited for distraction
As the day continues progressing and we continue our inhaling:
Will we be promoting God's goodness or will evil be prevailing?
Will we be holding too tightly to all that we should be sharing
This is our present challenge coming from our angels so caring.
(c) joy pachowicz
aka : littlefranciscan
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5 responses
@littlefranciscan (18327)
• United States
14 Nov 12
you're a native speak of English ? I never heard of speaking English that way; and I am in the USA ;)
@Shavkat (140119)
• Philippines
12 Nov 12
How I wish to have the ability to write poem again. The last time I did was in College years. I might even say, I wrote it for special someone. The feeling of inspired to do such a thing. But I am glad you have the passion to make your poem. I like the way it was conveyed, the flow of inner thoughts brought into materialization.
@littlefranciscan (18327)
• United States
14 Nov 12
it's never too late to start again..don't you think? I try to write one a day. I have school and other things going but soon I will have more time to give to mylot my poetry and writing as a whole . .thanks for stopping by and your kind comments...joy
@bloggeroo (2167)
• Philippines
11 Nov 12
There's actually somebody at Fiverr.com who's looking for help in writing a poem for a best man's speech. If you are in the zone about writing poetry, you might try your luck at earning from poetry-writing skills.
@littlefranciscan (18327)
• United States
11 Nov 12
Hi Bloggeroo..will have to check out that link .. Don't know how good I would be at such but I do appreciate you sharing that information ;) Hope you have a blessed Sunday.
@natliegleb (5175)
• India
11 Nov 12
this is a good poem with nice moral and interesting plots and it has so much value in it for sure
@littlefranciscan (18327)
• United States
14 Nov 12
thanks natlie.. hope you are having a nice day today. I try to keep my poems moral .. joy
@olivetree27 (495)
• Greece
12 Nov 12
what a great poem! Do you have a wattpad account? You can actually post it there. They had a poem contest before but now submissions are close and they are just waititng for the result. But you can join next time. You really have a talent in writing.
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@littlefranciscan (18327)
• United States
14 Nov 12
hi olivetree27, I never heard of wattpad will check it out in a moment or two..thanks for sharing this information.
