Missing Someone I Love
@cacay1 (83505)
Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
March 11, 2016 7:23am CST
In this cold evening
I remember someone I love
As I watch the stars in the skies,
I hear a sigh coming from the rainbow
I wonder why rainbow appears in this cold evening
Its colors take turns in interval
As if I am watching a carnival
I remain in my position,
To take away pains of missing you.
When I miss someone
The feeling is so different
It demands and withstands
The cube-like feeling
It rambles and squeezes your emotion
I feel so small in the world I belong
It’s the longing that creates madness
It seems like crazy thinking someone out of reach
It’s better to get sick than missing someone
I love.
Image credit: Pixabay
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10 responses
@ridingbet (66854)
• Philippines
12 Mar 16
I also miss someone I love but I know this person is busy during these times. I trust this person.
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@cacay1 (83505)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
12 Mar 16
@ridingbet, wow, Is he your husband ? Does he work abroad? Thanks.
@cacay1 (83505)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
13 Mar 16
@ridingbet Ha? My goodness, sorry to hear aout your separation my dear, and that was so long ago. You deserve to be happy.
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@ridingbet (66854)
• Philippines
13 Mar 16
@cacay1 i separated from him when my son was still 6 months young, my friend
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@slund2041 (3314)
• United States
12 Mar 16
Oh wow! Another heartfelt poem. You did a great job writing this.
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@slund2041 (3314)
• United States
14 Mar 16
@cacay1 You said you use to write poems in school. Why did you stop writing?
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@cacay1 (83505)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
20 Mar 16
@slund2041 I did not stop writing poems my dear. I have many there in a blog site and other sites like Triond,wikinut, BMR, Mykites,etc.
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@cacay1 (83505)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
12 Mar 16
@slund2041, Thanks friend. I used to write poem when I was in high school. I also numerous poems in my previous blog site.
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@abhinalstrikr (4111)
• India
20 Mar 16
yeah that pain is the greatest pain and cant be healed unless you try,after long long way it may but remains as old memory in brain and leaps forward every time we come across such things
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@cacay1 (83505)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
20 Mar 16
@abhinalstrikr, That is right, but pain is temporary, after few hours the feeling subsided. All we have to do is to avoid thinking of someone being missed,divert the mind.That is what I am doing every time I miss someone.
@abhinalstrikr (4111)
• India
20 Mar 16
@cacay1 life it self comprises of couple of days its upto us whether we want to dwell in present or in past
@elveeroy (93)
• India
14 Mar 16
yes its true...
i miss him very badly.. some times i feel guilty that i broke with him. baut the situation was so worst that i had to take this step..
n i now i miss him.. i want to go back to him.. but i dont even know. wat he is doing, how is he? , where is he? i feel very bad some times... i wish i pray.. where ever he is he must b fine n happy.. thats it... nothing is important for me. more than his happiness..
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@elveeroy (93)
• India
15 Mar 16
@cacay1 .. coz i dont hav any way to contact him... i tried to contact him.. but no reply.. he himself want me to go away frm his life.. n even i do go away, but if he give me a valid reason. he says "i not a right guy fr you, u deserve some one more better than me."
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@LeaPea2417 (37355)
• Toccoa, Georgia
12 Mar 16
That is very nicely written and I can relate to the feeling.
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@cacay1 (83505)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
13 Mar 16
@LeaPea2417, Thank you my dear.It's love.
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@teresaschultz (50)
• East London, South Africa
12 Mar 16
Missing someone you love, who you can't be with for whatever reason/s, is indeed the most awful experience.
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@cacay1 (83505)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
12 Mar 16
@teresaschultz, That is so so true, hard to spell restlessness, searching for the person we miss.The feeling sucks..
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