Have I troubled you enough friend?
By vanny
@vandana7 (100604)
India
March 11, 2016 9:21pm CST
May be not...
Oh but I need you...
To poke at you with my beak
No I am not hungry
Nor am I helping you
It is just a game
Born out of my boredom
It does not matter that you hurt
All I want to hear is your cries of help
And when others come to shoo me away
I will still go find somebody else
Well not may be a friend this time
Still somebody for my itching beak
'coz I don't want to say you were right
Even when the whole world says you were
I don't want to say you were right
Because deep down inside I know
That you cared
And I erred
I don't want to face it
So I am changing me
But I need you my friend
For putting up with the hurt I inflict
Aren't you my friend?
Or am I anybody's anymore.
Sometimes friends need to say goodbye.
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22 responses
@vandana7 (100604)
• India
17 Mar 16
@Drosophila ..yeah...sort of appear now and then..lol
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@Mike197602 (15512)
• United Kingdom
13 Mar 16
I'm not good at interpreting poems so had to read a few responses
Don't worry about getting back to me...if you take a break from here I hope to see you back soon
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@Daljinder (23236)
• Bangalore, India
12 Mar 16
Troubles make us grow up and be strong. You were teaching that to me.
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@hora_fugit (5862)
• India
13 Mar 16
@vandana7 I said what I had to, in the message. Am at peace... sure of myself...will get hold of you.
Sorry, did I increase your backlog?
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@vandana7 (100604)
• India
13 Mar 16
@hora_fugit ..Nothing to worry..searching for Hatley's comment. :)
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@1hopefulman (45120)
• Canada
21 Mar 16
I have no idea what this poem is about. But, it is always best when friends can find a way to deal with their differences and stay friends forever. If they have to leave for a while, there are different ways of keeping the friendship going. May it all end up well!
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@GreatMartin (23671)
• Ft. Lauderdale, Florida
13 Mar 16
Friends come and go--some last and some don't. It is known as life.
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@garymarsh6 (23404)
• United Kingdom
13 Mar 16
@vandana7 Vanny you can not leave us. I look forward to reading your comments.
@GrannyGee (3517)
• Louisburg, North Carolina
12 Mar 16
Your poem is written in an interesting way. Message in a poem ... maybe you won't say goodbye, leave. I hope not.
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@fishtiger58 (29820)
• Momence, Illinois
12 Mar 16
Please don't leave, we already lost one who is dear.
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@vandana7 (100604)
• India
13 Mar 16
@fishtiger58 ....I am sure he will have in his heart to understand how much he is loved...
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@fishtiger58 (29820)
• Momence, Illinois
13 Mar 16
@vandana7 I hope not long and maybe you can convince our mutual friend to come back too.
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@PainsOnSlate (21852)
• Canada
17 Mar 16
Goodbyes are hard on the giver and the one who leaves.
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@cindiowens (5120)
• North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
12 Mar 16
You can peck me with your beak, just don't hurt me too deeply. FRIEND
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