Have I troubled you enough friend?

@vandana7 (101274)

India

March 11, 2016 9:21pm CST

May be not... Oh but I need you... To poke at you with my beak No I am not hungry Nor am I helping you It is just a game Born out of my boredom It does not matter that you hurt All I want to hear is your cries of help And when others come to shoo me away I will still go find somebody else Well not may be a friend this time Still somebody for my itching beak 'coz I don't want to say you were right Even when the whole world says you were I don't want to say you were right Because deep down inside I know That you cared And I erred I don't want to face it So I am changing me But I need you my friend For putting up with the hurt I inflict Aren't you my friend? Or am I anybody's anymore. Sometimes friends need to say goodbye.

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@Drosophila (16571)

• Ireland

12 Mar 16

dammit.. the same friend lol xD

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Yeah..:(

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

17 Mar 16

@Drosophila ..yeah...sort of appear now and then..lol

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@Drosophila (16571)

• Ireland

13 Mar 16

@vandana7 awww you're taking a break?

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@LadyDuck (472482)

• Switzerland

12 Mar 16

I am still your friend and I hope you are not going to leave.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

I know you are my friend. :) You are a sweet person Anna. :) I will be gone for a while. Felt that these comments would disappear when I return and my friends won't earn. So decided to clear the backlog.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

15 Mar 16

@Micmac ..Looks like I got a second qualification...lol Sure...trying..

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@LadyDuck (472482)

• Switzerland

13 Mar 16

@vandana7 I will miss you my friend and I hope to see you back, do not stay away too long.

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@thesids (22180)

• Bhubaneswar, India

12 Mar 16

Wondering why we make someone as special as this "friend" of yours... that we forget all about the "others" who always loved us more than a "friend"

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Yes son-in-law...I know. Hugs.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

@thesids ..Daughters don't love because "bank rolls" because of us. Why did god give you a daughter..he should have given you a son..lol.

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@thesids (22180)

• Bhubaneswar, India

13 Mar 16

@vandana7 You had to take sides with the daughter, didn't you...

okay, I understand, but still...

Will await your return, as I realized, yours are the ones that keep my bank rolling...

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@TheHorse (223388)

• Walnut Creek, California

13 Mar 16

I don't like goodbyes so much.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Ok..no goodbye to you.

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@Mike197602 (15515)

• United Kingdom

13 Mar 16

I'm not good at interpreting poems so had to read a few responses

Don't worry about getting back to me...if you take a break from here I hope to see you back soon

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Yeah...I need a long break..

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@Daljinder (23236)

• Bangalore, India

12 Mar 16

Troubles make us grow up and be strong. You were teaching that to me.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

I have the part I - first draft ready...will paste it after initial verification. :)

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@hora_fugit (5862)

• India

12 Mar 16

I don't know, really. Still searching....

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@hora_fugit (5862)

• India

13 Mar 16

@vandana7 I said what I had to, in the message. Am at peace... sure of myself...will get hold of you.

Sorry, did I increase your backlog?

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

@hora_fugit ..Nothing to worry..searching for Hatley's comment. :)

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

You will find one like that...don't worry.

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@1hopefulman (45114)

• Canada

21 Mar 16

I have no idea what this poem is about. But, it is always best when friends can find a way to deal with their differences and stay friends forever. If they have to leave for a while, there are different ways of keeping the friendship going. May it all end up well!

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

21 Mar 16

Thanks for your wishes. :)

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@pgiblett (6524)

• Canada

12 Mar 16

II am full of sadness for your parting.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

I will stalk you Peter..just not as much. :) I will keep a watch on you and report to your wife if you are philandering too much...remember I am still the second darlin..lol

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

@pgiblett ..Yeah...behind the scenes...you won't flirt with others in front of me, will you Peter?

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@pgiblett (6524)

• Canada

13 Mar 16

@vandana7 You have to be where it is best for you.

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@jstory07 (141910)

• Roseburg, Oregon

12 Mar 16

I hope you are not going to say good by. I like reading your discussion.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

And I like yours too. :) Going for a while...will be back..later. Clearing some backlog as friends wont earn if I don't reply.

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@GreatMartin (23671)

• Ft. Lauderdale, Florida

13 Mar 16

Friends come and go--some last and some don't. It is known as life.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

That is why life stinks.

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@garymarsh6 (23410)

• United Kingdom

12 Mar 16

Nicely written Vandana

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Thank you. Hope you are doing good.

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@garymarsh6 (23410)

• United Kingdom

13 Mar 16

@vandana7 Vanny you can not leave us. I look forward to reading your comments.

Gloria Faye Brown Bates

@GrannyGee (3517)

• Louisburg, North Carolina

12 Mar 16

Your poem is written in an interesting way. Message in a poem ... maybe you won't say goodbye, leave. I hope not.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

After clearing a few comments...I may not be around for a while. :) Thank you. :)

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Gloria Faye Brown Bates

@GrannyGee (3517)

• Louisburg, North Carolina

13 Mar 16

@fishtiger58 (29820)

• Momence, Illinois

12 Mar 16

Please don't leave, we already lost one who is dear.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Will be gone for a while..won't be proper not to reply to so many comments as these friends won't earn when I return.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

@fishtiger58 ....I am sure he will have in his heart to understand how much he is loved...

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@fishtiger58 (29820)

• Momence, Illinois

13 Mar 16

@vandana7 I hope not long and maybe you can convince our mutual friend to come back too.

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@sjvg1976 (41711)

• Delhi, India

12 Mar 16

Sometimes we need change and that's life. Nicely written.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Thank you.

@suni51 (3429)

• India

12 Mar 16

Do you think you or someone can do that to me? Decide for yourself whether you troubled me or not as I was not here for years. So hat you did in my absence with your friends is best known to you

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Indian..I can always get hold of you.

@PainsOnSlate (21852)

• Canada

17 Mar 16

Goodbyes are hard on the giver and the one who leaves.

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@cindiowens (5120)

• North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina

12 Mar 16

You can peck me with your beak, just don't hurt me too deeply. FRIEND

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Thank you for the offer. I really appreciate it. I will take it up some day...no...I hope not...I would only hurt so much when I hurt somewhere..

@Lucky15 (37374)

• Philippines

12 Mar 16

Sad...butn some will leave

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

13 Mar 16

Yes indeed. Feels terrible.

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@RussTeed (1498)

• United States

14 Mar 16

This excellently written and quite inciteful.

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@vandana7 (101274)

• India

14 Mar 16

Inciteful? lol