Fleeting Thoughts

@inertia4 (27960)

United States

July 23, 2017 7:08pm CST

This world is so Un-attending Where do we go With condescending How do we know We are complaining We have lost Our social grace We live so fast We’re out of place Will it all last Without disgrace I ponder why Every single day I am at a loss For a true answer I wonder why We live this way Who is the boss Are we a cancer The frightening thoughts That we all have Are always in the paper Our sadness comes from last resorts After we all gave To the government reaper Why do we do The android Can we not choose or get annoyed Are we just fools Who are denied The climate changed We no longer live Life’s been rearranged We now must give We now have insane As we survive The words you just read Are of fleeting thoughts They come from all over But land in one place I have said what I said The fights have been fought There is no four leaf clover just a slice of micro peace Copyright © 2014 Steven Cetta All Rights Reserved Image Credit: CoolText.com

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@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

24 Jul 17

inmertia you never cease to amaze me with your poems so verygood I remember when we were on bubbledws bdword you still wrote great poems too

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

Ah, you remember that bubble site. Awesome. Yeah, I wrote a lot there. Too bad they screwed us over. But we have MyLot, the best place online. Thanks for liked the poem.

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@Hatley (163776)

• Garden Grove, California

24 Jul 17

@inertia4 yesmylotis somuch betterwow

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

25 Jul 17

@Hatley I always liked MyLot. No matter what. But yes, it is way better now than before.

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Valerie J. Routhieaux

@just4him (317040)

• Green Bay, Wisconsin

26 Jul 17

Well said. It might be fleeting thoughts, but you put them together well.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

27 Jul 17

@just4him Thanks again.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

26 Jul 17

Well thank you for that. I try. I am no real poet or real writer. But I do enjoy doing it. Thank you again.

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Valerie J. Routhieaux

@just4him (317040)

• Green Bay, Wisconsin

27 Jul 17

@inertia4 You're welcome.

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@TiarasOceanView (70022)

• United States

24 Jul 17

Cool Steven

Its great you can gather these fleeing thoughts together and make something of them. Micro peace is very significant..like that term. I will adopt it..it is better than no peace at all.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

Cool. I am happy that you enjoyed the poem and like parts of it for your own. I will be posting more.

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@TiarasOceanView (70022)

• United States

24 Jul 17

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

@TiarasOceanView Thanks again.

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@jaboUK (64354)

• United Kingdom

26 Jul 17

This sounds like a 'stream of consciousness' rap to me. I like it, well done.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

26 Jul 17

Thank you. I forgot how I wrote this. I don't remember what I was thinking of. But it came out and there it is.

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@DianneN (247186)

• United States

24 Jul 17

Wonderful poem, as usual!

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

Nice!!! Thank you very much. Glad you liked it. I try my best, you know that.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

1 Aug 17

@DianneN Aww shucks. LOL. Thank you. I really do appreciate that.

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@DianneN (247186)

• United States

1 Aug 17

@inertia4 Yes, I know. You write so well!

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@RubyHawk (99405)

• Atlanta, Georgia

24 Jul 17

very good poetry.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

Thank you. Glad you liked it and enjoyed it. I have many more where this came from.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

25 Jul 17

@RubyHawk Well, I have some already posted if you go through my posts here. But I will be posting more of them.

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@RubyHawk (99405)

• Atlanta, Georgia

25 Jul 17

@inertia4 That's great. Share them with us.

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@1hopefulman (45120)

• Canada

3 Aug 17

A very interesting poem from a concerned, caring and observing person whose thoughts can go anywhere and everywhere and hopefully someday, somewhere.

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@1hopefulman (45120)

• Canada

4 Aug 17

@inertia4 Many people enjoy your poems and so you have a forum where you can share them.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

8 Aug 17

@1hopefulman Thanks. I am no stranger to MyLot. As you know I have been here for many years now. And yes, this is the best forum to share my poems and my short stories. I tried many there sites that seemed to fail or stop paying for content.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

4 Aug 17

Thank you. I am glad you liked it and enjoyed it. I have many more and I will be posting them.

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@toniganzon (72281)

• Philippines

24 Jul 17

Great poem. It just made me realize that I shouldn't be complaining a lot with the people around me.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

No, we shouldn't. There are much bigger problems in this ugly world to deal with.

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@quantum2020 (12041)

• Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico

26 Jul 17

Some fleeting thoughts came to my mind while reading your poem

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

26 Jul 17

Cool. Glad you enjoyed it and were able to think of some things. Hope your lunch was good. Enjoy.

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Arthur Chappell

@arthurchappell (44998)

• Preston, England

4 Aug 17

nicely set out verse stanzas for this

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

10 Aug 17

Thank you very much for that. I appreciate that.

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@Letranknight2015 (51938)

• Philippines

24 Jul 17

I don't want to think much of the problems of the world in which I have no control of. I can barely have my own control here.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

I hear you. I know what you mean. We all have our own things to worry about.

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@PatZAnthony (14749)

• Charlotte, North Carolina

31 Jul 17

Very interesting thoughts that make us think, which can be a great thing @inertia4

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

31 Jul 17

Thank you. I appreciate that. I always try to make my content somewhat interesting.

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@lookatdesktop (27134)

• Dallas, Texas

28 Jul 17

Very nice poem. I like.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

28 Jul 17

Thank you. I haven't been around in awhile. And I haven't seen you in a long time.

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@Kandae11 (54986)

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24 Jul 17

Wonderful poem.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

24 Jul 17

Well, thank you very much for that.

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@Shellyann36 (11384)

• United States

16 Sep 17

It's good to see you here. I see that you are posting once again. How has life been treating you?

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

16 Sep 17

Life has been somewhat up and down for me for awhile. Some good and some bad. But now everything is good. So I am happy to be posting again. Although I still go through periods of not coming online. I have been getting back into vinyl records with my son. So that has been taking some of my time up.

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@Shellyann36 (11384)

• United States

24 Sep 17

@inertia4 Yep, I believe that the place got a good deal for their $250. It is good to have a hobby that you can share with your son!

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

20 Sep 17

@Shellyann36 Wow, that's cheap. I wish I was around for that. I still have all my vinyl from the 70's and up. I did stop buying them for some years but got back into it with my son. He loves vinyl. I guess it's cool again. And the one thing with that is that you own the music. And always have it.

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Tina Dalasinski

@Tina30219 (81899)

• Onaway, Michigan

17 Sep 17

Very nice

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Tina Dalasinski

@Tina30219 (81899)

• Onaway, Michigan

17 Sep 17

@inertia4 Your very welcome

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

18 Sep 17

@Tina30219 Thank you again. You are so kind.

@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

17 Sep 17

Thank you, I appreciate that.

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Belle Starr (Iz)

@BelleStarr (61102)

• United States

26 Sep 17

I hope that you are not feeling quite as dark today as you did when you wrote this. You are a very good poet.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

26 Sep 17

Most of my poetry is not from real life experience. Some are, not this one though. Thank you for that compliment. I appreciate that.

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@jstory07 (139502)

• Roseburg, Oregon

25 Sep 17

I really like the poem that you wrote and everything is so true.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

26 Sep 17

Thank you. I am glad you liked and enjoyed it. I have many more where that came from. I need to dust them off and post them up. They will be coming.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

2 Oct 17

@jstory07 Oh I will. I have been a little busy lately though. I will post a few this week, I promise.

@jstory07 (139502)

• Roseburg, Oregon

30 Sep 17

@inertia4 Dust them off and start posting.

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@bluesa (15022)

• Johannesburg, South Africa

30 Sep 17

With everything going on right now, your poem is not only great but so very apt too. "We now have insane As we survive. " These words of yours are so very true.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

2 Oct 17

Thank you very much for that. I can see that in my poem. We are living in an insane time. Without a doubt.

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@kobesbuddy (78882)

• East Tawas, Michigan

11 Aug 17

I love this writing, these words are so true and they deeply touched my heart! Thank you:)

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

11 Aug 17

You are very welcome. Anytime. I try my best when writing. I am so happy that you liked this poem. Thank you.

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@inertia4 (27960)

• United States

13 Aug 17

@kobesbuddy Thank you again.

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@kobesbuddy (78882)

• East Tawas, Michigan

12 Aug 17

@inertia4 You are very welcome, good job!:)

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