Share a poem I wrote today

United Kingdom

December 31, 2017 6:11am CST

Twilight This muddy road Free walking in the twilight Quiet aftertaste This orange red cloud Twilight dreams Muddy road Meet you by chance Meet in this twilight scene Raffle-like breeze Breeze is Your brilliant smile Pink twilight Decorate your brow Infected my sleeve Black face Full load is I am deeply sad Waiting quietly Your twilight figure Walked quietly by my side Brilliant smile Take away is My infinite sorrow Walked gently This muddy road Take a walk in the twilight Silently share That orange red clouds Twilight dreams

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@KristenH (33385)

• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio

31 Dec 17

Beautiful. Nicely done.

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@KristenH (33385)

• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio

31 Dec 17

@mumu2358 Welcome.

• United Kingdom

31 Dec 17

thank you

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Aashish Basnyat

@creativeaashish (2609)

• Kathmandu, Nepal

31 Dec 17

Nice! Nice! Nice! Great poem. Thank you!

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Aashish Basnyat

@creativeaashish (2609)

• Kathmandu, Nepal

31 Dec 17

@mom210 (9117)

• United States

23 Jan 18

What a nice job you did on this. I did enjoy it

@Kandae11 (55040)

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31 Dec 17

Nice poem.

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• United Kingdom

31 Dec 17

thank you

@Icydoll (36717)

• India

1 Jan 18

That's nice poem.to whom you are dedicating this ?

I'm also going to try poem after seeing this

Khagendra Bohara

@khagendra1994 (1226)

• Kathmandu, Nepal

1 Jan 18

You beauty! I love this poem

@1hopefulman (45120)

• Canada

31 Dec 17

Very nice! Yes, the road may be muddy but love is amazing.

@justkati123 (1)

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31 Dec 17

Great poem i love it :)