CRITIQUE MY POEM

@Santosvb (346)
Guyana
August 6, 2018 2:04pm CST
He found a way into her soul Gives nothing less, treats her like gold A romance thats so gentle and free She now realise its all she needs..... How is it?
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Kandase
@Kandae11 (55787)
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6 Aug 18
I am not a critic, but it sounds okay. Maybe you should add another line.
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Maria Sanchez
@Santosvb (346)
• Guyana
6 Aug 18
ok thank you so much, i was actually considering that, definitely gonna do it now
Carolyn Purser
@CarolynP777 (103)
• United States
25 Oct 18
I think it's a lovely poem.