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@theend (2777)

Gifu, Japan

September 5, 2018 2:03am CST

On a beautiful September day, I allow myself to hear soft songs, sit back and read old poems of many people but still like 4 verses of someone about a flower "clinging". "The pasture is full of sunflowers Long time no look Without you with a charming smile This life will soon disappear.

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@ilocosboy (45156)

• Philippines

5 Sep 18

That poem is so deep and I'm having hard time understanding it.

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@ilocosboy (45156)

• Philippines

5 Sep 18

No, I think its awesome. Its just that I'm not really incline to poem.

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

Maybe I do not write poetry very well, to always create more new works

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

@ilocosboy Thanks for comforting me.

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@LadyDuck (471968)

• Switzerland

5 Sep 18

It is a beautiful poem. The days in September have warmer colors than full summer, I like to look at the flowers and the fields.

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@LadyDuck (471968)

• Switzerland

5 Sep 18

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

You are the one who knows it, unlike the others.

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@May2k8 (18389)

• Indonesia

5 Sep 18

your poem is beautiful, and september you make me smile with your writing that is getting better.

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@May2k8 (18389)

• Indonesia

5 Sep 18

@theend very interesting, you can do it only in a matter of days.

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

I feel like I have arranged it very well.

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

@May2k8 That is easy, I see as it is a praise. thank you.

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@Shavkat (140097)

• Philippines

5 Sep 18

Nice poem you got here.

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@Shavkat (140097)

• Philippines

7 Sep 18

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

really is so.

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@jaboUK (64354)

• United Kingdom

5 Sep 18

That's a sweet poem, did you write it yourself? However 'The fade quickly fades away' doesn't make sense -fade is not a noun. I realise that English is not your first language, so I'm only trying to help

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

I was here and waited for you for a long time. Thank you for helping me know it is not a noun.

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@Janet357 (75646)

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5 Sep 18

ahh poems! it's music to my ears everytime i hear such. i started writing poems when i was just ten years old and the title was ...In The Garden

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

I also want to know about the poem "in the garden"

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@Janet357 (75646)

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5 Sep 18

@theend im now 38. i cannot remember it anymore. i wrote it 28 yrs ago, it was one paragraph poem with 4 lines, written on a piece of paper.

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@jpso138 (7851)

• Philippines

6 Sep 18

Great poem. It is indeed something that has a deeper meaning about love and life. I used to write poems a lot before. Usually, I noticed that writing a poem often comes with inspiration or perhaps something we experience. May it be a good one or bad, it will bring out the best in us to write things.

@ptrikha_2 (47062)

• India

7 Sep 18

Lovely poem. Enjoy your Friday and the weekend.

@1hopefulman (45120)

• Canada

10 Oct 18

Very nice poem! It is simple and yet deep. Without love, then life is not a happy one. The Creator who made the flowers and nature did everything because He loves us and wants us to be happy.

@lady1993 (27224)

• Philippines

5 Sep 18

I'm not very good with poems.. but the picture is nice

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

Thank you too much praise, I feel good too.

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@SIMPLYD (90721)

• Philippines

6 Sep 18

Nice short poem you have there. It connotes sadness though. Sad heart.

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@DianneN (247186)

• United States

6 Sep 18

That is a sweet and touching poem.

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@DianneN (247186)

• United States

7 Sep 18

@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

7 Sep 18

thank you many.

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@Courage7 (19633)

• United States

5 Sep 18

A lovely photo of a smiling face to go with the fall. I love this beautiful writing poem thank you Duong. I hope your day is super

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

I hope so, thank you for the compliment.

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@Courage7 (19633)

• United States

5 Sep 18

@theend Welcome my friend.

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

5 Sep 18

@Courage7 I like this.

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@Nickzter1331 (4229)

• Philippines

5 Sep 18

,,,nice poem my friend,,,

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@theend (2777)

• Gifu, Japan

6 Sep 18

thank you, my friend.