Devolution - WIP

devolution
@ledante (1086)
Taipei, Taiwan
November 21, 2018 5:51pm CST
Recently I posted an alternate version of this piece, which I felt was a little too dark. This version has an additional light source and a different camera angle, what do you think now? By way of comparison, here is a link to the original... http://www.mylot.com/post/3230109/descent-wip
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@Mavic123456 (21893)
• Thailand
22 Nov 18
I think it is okay now. if the shot is supposedly evening and in the alley.
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@Mavic123456 (21893)
• Thailand
24 Nov 18
@ledante this one.
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
25 Nov 18
@Mavic123456 I wanted it to be in an alley in the evening, and it sounds like I was able to pull it off...
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
24 Nov 18
which it is!
@Shavkat (140118)
• Philippines
22 Nov 18
I think it is quite dark.
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
22 Nov 18
Sure it is, but did you see the original version?
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@Shavkat (140118)
• Philippines
23 Nov 18
@ledante I haven't seen it.
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
24 Nov 18
I wanted to do a gothic girl at the bottom of some stairs. This isn't done yet, still a work in progress but it seems like I've caught most of the idea...
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@SIMPLYD (90721)
• Philippines
22 Nov 18
Just like Shavkat my comment is that it is dark. The girl should be easily seen in the picture.
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
24 Nov 18
It is meant to be dark, though. A well lit shot wouldn't have the same vibe...
@hillhjill (23717)
• United States
22 Nov 18
That looks really good, I like the other one as well at how she was looking and the blood on the ground by her foot.
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@hillhjill (23717)
• United States
22 Nov 18
@ledante awesome!!
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
22 Nov 18
I have a version of that one as well, perhaps I'll post it tomorrow
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
25 Nov 18
@hillhjill arrgh, I keep not posting it...
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@CarolDM (203422)
• Nashville, Tennessee
22 Nov 18
Yep. The other one is on the darker side for sure.
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
24 Nov 18
I need to strike a balance between detail and atmosphere
• Rupert, Idaho
22 Nov 18
I like them both, but I definitely like the added light source and this is a great angle!
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@ledante (1086)
• Taipei, Taiwan
24 Nov 18
all these different camera angles are driving me up the wall
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