Maybe I do a little Poetry, Did I tell you? ( From my " words I mess around with some days:)

Canada
January 14, 2019 5:53pm CST
Did I tell you how I feel the sun on my face Through the crisp autumn breeze It feels different these days Remembering those eyes looking into mine As my body crashed into yours How could I forget Did I tell you how I laugh a little longer now and that when the music plays I could dance all night Underneath the harvest moon Perhaps its that moment When your lips touched mine How could I forget Did I tell you how my mornings are spent with a brush in hand Colours never fading Intertwining ever so softly Like your hands on my hips how could I forget It’s like a gift that keeps on giving Oceans apart Yet when I close my eyes We are back to the start How could I forget Did I tell Irishlasskicker
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• Philippines
14 Jan 19
Nice one
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
why thank you :)
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@Happy2BeMe (99380)
• Canada
15 Jan 19
Very nice.
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@Happy2BeMe (99380)
• Canada
15 Jan 19
@Irishlasskicker you are welcome
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
Thanks so much:)
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@jstory07 (139715)
• Roseburg, Oregon
15 Jan 19
I really like what you wrote it is very nice.
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
aww thanks glad you like :)
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@xander6464 (44245)
• Wapello, Iowa
15 Jan 19
This reminds me of something...
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@xander6464 (44245)
• Wapello, Iowa
15 Jan 19
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
@xander6464 Its magical and whimsical and takes you off to a far off place :)
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
I love that poetry can do that for people :)
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@josie_ (10034)
• Philippines
15 Jan 19
I start my mornings with a cup of coffee, but reading poetry works just fine to perk up my day. Thanks for the poem. (It's morning here in the Philippines)
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
So cool :) Good morning to you and you are welcome :)
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@responsiveme (22926)
• India
15 Jan 19
A very evocative love poem. Do they now live across oceans in different continents?
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• India
15 Jan 19
@Irishlasskicker in the poem then..
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
@responsiveme I would have to say yes in the poem
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
Just a poem not about anyone :) thank you so much
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@Courage7 (19633)
• United States
15 Jan 19
Lovely romantic poem!
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
Thanks so much was really going for the romantic side of things :)
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• New Delhi, India
15 Jan 19
You are a great poet
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
aww thanks so much :) I have to get back to writing some more poems :)
@Janet357 (75646)
15 Jan 19
I like the style. Reading it is like being in a hammock gently swayed by the cool afternoon breeze.
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• Canada
15 Jan 19
aww you got exactly how I was feeling when I wrote this poem , awesome :) Thank you
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@debjani1 (7202)
16 Jan 19
Well written.
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• Canada
16 Jan 19
Thanks so much glad you liked