Pots Of Gold
By Jabo
@jaboUK (64354)
United Kingdom
March 17, 2019 3:11pm CST
Two leprechauns were out to play
and Patrick just happened to say
"Mine's bigger than yours
I know that because
I saw yours when out yesterday."
"Your eyes have deceived you" Sean said
"or else you are wrong in the head,
stop telling your lies
for mine's the best size
it's plain that your good sense has fled."
"No, yours is far smaller than mine
you must have been slurping the wine,
though you may protest
mine's simply the best
no matter how much you may whine."
They then set them down side by side
and both were as deep as were wide,
equal honours they hold
as their Pots of Gold
were treasures that caused them both pride.
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33 responses
@responsiveme (22926)
• India
18 Mar 19
Ha ha if it wasn't for the title ,this might be a bit too naughty.
I love your rhymes but you probably know that by now.
This is a celebration which I am learning of only recently ,here on this site and through WhatsApp messages.
What is it, they were bragging about?
I understand you are in doubt,
It's just containers of gold
So if truth needs to be told
Jabo no rules did flout.
@much2say ...I thought like you too
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@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
18 Mar 19
@responsiveme Thanks for giving me a fine limerick in reply. Lol - no rules flouted though it's a pity. I would have liked for people to not know what I was talking about until the final verse. But the admin here are somewhat prudish so I put that title on it.
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@rebelann (112879)
• El Paso, Texas
18 Mar 19
Yes, I've noticed that as well @jaboUK I think a lot of it has to do with whether or not someone decides to report a discussion.
Yours have never been offensive like some of the garbage I have seen written on this site. I don't know if those got deleted but those should have just because they were trashy.
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@BelleStarr (61102)
• United States
18 Mar 19
It seems that the matter of size
Is often dependant on eyes
When men are concerned
Large sizes they yearn
When gold or else is the prize
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@nanette64 (20364)
• Fairfield, Texas
9 May 19
Boy did that one throw me off @jaboUK . Knowing me; you can only imagine what I thought they were comparing.
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@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
12 May 19
@nanette64 Yep, I think a lot of people were
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@nanette64 (20364)
• Fairfield, Texas
10 May 19
@jaboUK I imagine the guys were thinking the same thing I was.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
22 Mar 19
Love it Jan good job that they are both so rich in everything.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
23 Mar 19
@jaboUK
Whichever way you have nailed it and yes I know I was trying to write something and it sounded out of place too so I changed my mind instead.
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@changjiangzhibin89 (16764)
• China
18 Mar 19
I haven't known about leprechaun and St Patrick's Day,so I find it difficult to get into the poem.However the responses below your post goves me some clues to understand it.
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@changjiangzhibin89 (16764)
• China
19 Mar 19
@jaboUK Thanks for explaining it to me ! I learn a lot from your posts.
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@acelawrites (19272)
• Philippines
17 Mar 19
So funny; but I was wondering what was that they were debating about.
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@acelawrites (19272)
• Philippines
17 Mar 19
@jaboUK I thought you are thinking what am thinking? Or is it just me thinking about it?
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