Wet Feet

By Titia Geertman

Netherlands

December 16, 2020 6:07pm CST

Emptying my head, thoughts flowing on a soft breeze. Where to? I wonder and followed one, until it became invisible byond the horizon. New thought, I look around to see who had send it. No one there. Must have popped over from the other side. Waves rolling, drowning in the sand, over and over. Now where did that seagull go- Eyes closed. Splash!! Damn, wet feet. Time to go home.

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@Deepizzaguy (102799)

• Lake Charles, Louisiana

17 Dec 20

I like your post.

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@rebelann (112872)

• El Paso, Texas

17 Dec 20

That was cute, it's not a limerick so what is it called?

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@rebelann (112872)

• El Paso, Texas

20 Dec 20

Oh ok, I was unaware of that type @TitiaG

• Netherlands

17 Dec 20

Thanks, this is called free verse

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@Shavkat (139933)

• Philippines

17 Dec 20

I miss going to the beach.

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@rakski (122903)

• Philippines

17 Dec 20

good job! welcome to myot!!

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@sharonelton (28846)

• Lichfield, England

17 Dec 20

I love that. That's really good.

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• Netherlands

17 Dec 20

Thank you. I wrote that long time ago. I live about 15 min. from the North Sea. Lovely place to be when it's not crowded with tourists.

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@sharonelton (28846)

• Lichfield, England

18 Dec 20

@TitiaG I bet. It must be beautiful there.

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@Hytton03 (5451)

• Philippines

20 Dec 20

Nice thanks for sharing ;)

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@popciclecold (38721)

• United States

17 Dec 20

That's neat.

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@LadyDuck (471500)

• Switzerland

17 Dec 20

This little poem, free verse, is very nice and funny.