Watch the stars

Hangzhou, China
February 24, 2022 1:51am CST
Please remember my love baby. I know he's the one you're looking for. Maybe it's time,I should let you go, The flowers can't hold the bee. I understand how you think, So in this hotel,I just drink the grape wine alone. Don't feel sorry for me.I'll be okay. Without you,I still can live happily. I promise to take you to watch the stars, Now everything has gone with the wind. What could I say?What could I pray? Love dies too young. I promise to take you to watch the stars. Now every pain has different sound. Why would I stay?What should I pay? Just hope the love survive again. I said i won't shed the tears, Just left you for some years. Guess what my heart hears, Just wanna taste your sweet beers. I know you won't come here Just like the rainbow won't appear on my pears Without you,rain showers by my ears. Without you,what's the meaning of the stars in my spheres? oh... Baby,i admit i can't live without you. Just come back to here,fly to my heart
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@aluthfi (36)
24 Feb 22
So beautiful,hope you have a nice day
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• Hangzhou, China
24 Feb 22
It's my pleasure to hear that,same wish to you
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3 Mar 22
That's melancholy but a good poem nevertheless. Are you a writer by any chance?
• Hangzhou, China
3 Mar 22
I'm just a poetry fan.I've been writing the poems since i was 14 years old.But i never publish any works because there's no freedom and human rights in my country.I have to hide what what i wrote,or maybe i'll be arrested for my dissidences. I've been arrested twice for my dissidences.I never dare to publish any works in my country,surely,no one will publish my poetries because i'm just a nobody in this country.
• Hangzhou, China
7 Mar 22
@ihasaquestion i'm too poor to do these,i don't know which Oversea Publisher i can contact. Meantime,my English is not well,my main works are my Chinese poems.I also don't dare to contact those publishers in Taiwan,China or Foreign countries if i know how to contact.Because i fear they'll be controlled by CCP.Then i'll maybe caught because of my dissidences. I guess i just need a miracle that one day i won't be persecuted for my speech in my country or i can leave my works to the people in future.I believe i'll be a poet if my works can be read by the people in future,just like John Keats,stars always shine.It's just a problem of time and opportunity
6 Mar 22
@choijungeun I see. Can you publish it overseas though, and get credits for your work? If there is a way for it then it'll be good for you to get some kind of creative exposure.
@Shavkat (140131)
• Philippines
24 Feb 22
Nice poem, I watch stars before sleeping at night.
@Shavkat (140131)
• Philippines
24 Feb 22
@choijungeun You cannot see stars now there? Is it because of the haze?
• Hangzhou, China
24 Feb 22
I'd watched the stars when i was child,that was really beautiful
• Hangzhou, China
24 Feb 22
@Shavkat I can watch it in the sunny night,but today i can't,because it's a snowy day.
@RebeccasFarm (90523)
• Arvada, Colorado
24 Feb 22
Deep love is branded inside of people. This is such sadness but beauty.
• Arvada, Colorado
24 Feb 22
@choijungeun It is the human experience
• Hangzhou, China
24 Feb 22
Yep,only the heartbroken yearning can let us know what the true beauty and love is
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@jstory07 (140043)
• Roseburg, Oregon
24 Feb 22
I hope you get back together. Good luck,
• Hangzhou, China
24 Feb 22
Thanks for the bless,I believe god will give the lovers who truly love each other a beautiful miracle.
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@jstory07 (140043)
• Roseburg, Oregon
24 Feb 22
@choijungeun That would be so nice.
@just4him (317315)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
17 Mar 22
Interesting poem.
• Hangzhou, China
18 Mar 22
Thanks for dropping by,it's my pleasure to hear that
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@sarik1 (7283)
24 Feb 22
So nice. have a great day.
• Hangzhou, China
24 Feb 22
Thank you very much,same wish to you
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