My Love
@cacay1 (83581)
Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
August 26, 2022 12:48am CST
( I composed this poem for those who are in love yesterday and today.)
My love, you're my everything
There's no boring moment with you
It's your face my mind see night & day
When evening comes, I pray it's day
To feel your hand touched mine
To hear your whisper teasing me
To feel your nearness to burn my soul
To inspire me with your sweet caress
My love, you're no longer mine
You inflict pain onto my heart in refrain
I was wrong to believe your fake heart
Oh, how much I hate you now
Even your shadow I hate to see
I no longer like night becomes day
There's no reason to be in hurry to see you in the day
For in seeing you again makes my day
meaningless aching
I still thank you for that fake love
For you taught me how love is felt
Not like yours fake, weak, mine pure until eternity.
Thank you guys for reading, sharing is caring.
Image credit to Facebook gif
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14 responses
@DevMrSamEleazar (14058)
• Philippines
26 Aug 22
I can really feel it. Its like one sided love if I am not mistaken.
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@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@DevMrSamEleazar , wow, seriously Sam You guessed it right. One-sided love is unfair. Temptation is also stronger to attain by those weak in principle.
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@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@DevMrSamEleazar , be careful in choosing a girl worthy of your feeling. Do not be in a rush. You are still young and have much time to meet someone true and faithful.
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@DevMrSamEleazar (14058)
• Philippines
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 oh wow I am glad I guess it right.
Yes you are right.
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@allknowing (137914)
• India
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 I hope you will finally get your love.
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@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@allknowing love expired already
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@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@allknowing, yes, so many times and failed many times too
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@RebeccasFarm (90520)
• Arvada, Colorado
26 Aug 22
A lovely poem Erly..its true this is how it is.
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@RebeccasFarm (90520)
• Arvada, Colorado
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 I fell in love a thousand nights
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@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
28 Aug 22
@RebeccasFarm wow, why night only
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@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@RebeccasFarm, thank you my dear, love is a wonderful feeling if both are true, if not, it will be a one-sided love, unfair love.
@clrumfelt (5490)
• United States
28 Aug 22
Is it better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all? An empty heart or heartache, which to choose?
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@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
28 Aug 22
@cirumfelt, time also heals a broken heart.
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@fransmonlot (411)
• United States
26 Aug 22
Thank you for sharing. Your poem truly madly deeply shows the true essence of sweet love. You can give all your heart, unfortunately, to the wrong person and get hurt. Unfortunately, that is exactly my Franchy experience. Almost everything he said was a lie, and I found out too late. Always remember that actions speak louder than words. Make sure you are very careful about who you give your heart to ya. Ya, make sure they deserve it.
@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@fransmonlot, Hi France? Thanks too for sharing your feeling. Yes, it is not easy to cure a broken heart, but time heals and helps move on to the next chapter of life.
@cacay1 (83581)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@Butterfingers, Thank you, dear, I am just expressing my love's experience. Love is so beautiful but if cheated, it becomes like hell.
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