My Love

Love you till eternity
@cacay1 (83495)
Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
August 26, 2022 12:48am CST
( I composed this poem for those who are in love yesterday and today.) My love, you're my everything There's no boring moment with you It's your face my mind see night & day When evening comes, I pray it's day To feel your hand touched mine To hear your whisper teasing me To feel your nearness to burn my soul To inspire me with your sweet caress My love, you're no longer mine You inflict pain onto my heart in refrain I was wrong to believe your fake heart Oh, how much I hate you now Even your shadow I hate to see I no longer like night becomes day There's no reason to be in hurry to see you in the day For in seeing you again makes my day meaningless aching I still thank you for that fake love For you taught me how love is felt Not like yours fake, weak, mine pure until eternity. Thank you guys for reading, sharing is caring. Image credit to Facebook gif
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14 responses
@Kandae11 (55035)
26 Aug 22
Love can be painful when it is not returned or goes cold.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
26 Aug 22
@Kandae11 yes so terribly painful. We seem to forget the present only the past that keeps sucking in too much pain.
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• Philippines
26 Aug 22
I can really feel it. Its like one sided love if I am not mistaken.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@DevMrSamEleazar , wow, seriously Sam You guessed it right. One-sided love is unfair. Temptation is also stronger to attain by those weak in principle.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@DevMrSamEleazar , be careful in choosing a girl worthy of your feeling. Do not be in a rush. You are still young and have much time to meet someone true and faithful.
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• Philippines
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 oh wow I am glad I guess it right. Yes you are right.
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@allknowing (136525)
• India
27 Aug 22
Well written. Are you in love too?
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@allknowing (136525)
• India
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 I hope you will finally get your love.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@allknowing love expired already
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@allknowing, yes, so many times and failed many times too
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@RebeccasFarm (89873)
• Arvada, Colorado
26 Aug 22
A lovely poem Erly..its true this is how it is.
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• Arvada, Colorado
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 I fell in love a thousand nights
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
28 Aug 22
@RebeccasFarm wow, why night only
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@RebeccasFarm, thank you my dear, love is a wonderful feeling if both are true, if not, it will be a one-sided love, unfair love.
@DianneN (247186)
• United States
27 Aug 22
Heartfelt poem and so nicely written.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@DianneN, thank you, Dianne. I have missed you, pretty lady. I hope you're in the pink of health.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@DianneN hehehe thank goodness. I have just read your post and knew you were so busy.
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@DianneN (247186)
• United States
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 Same to you. All is well with me.
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@CarolDM (203422)
• Nashville, Tennessee
26 Aug 22
Very nicely written. How romantic. You have a unique style.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@CarolDM, hi carol? Thank you much. I highly appreciate your feeling of liking my poem full of love and pain.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@CarolDM , thank you, my friend. I hope you're now almost 100 % in good health. Love you.
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@CarolDM (203422)
• Nashville, Tennessee
27 Aug 22
@cacay1 Good to see you. You are very talented.
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@clrumfelt (5490)
• United States
28 Aug 22
Is it better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all? An empty heart or heartache, which to choose?
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
28 Aug 22
@cirumfelt, time also heals a broken heart.
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@sjvg1976 (41281)
• Delhi, India
7 Sep 22
Were you betrayed by someone in love?
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
7 Sep 22
@sjvg1976 yes hehe, that's life.
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• United States
26 Aug 22
Thank you for sharing. Your poem truly madly deeply shows the true essence of sweet love. You can give all your heart, unfortunately, to the wrong person and get hurt. Unfortunately, that is exactly my Franchy experience. Almost everything he said was a lie, and I found out too late. Always remember that actions speak louder than words. Make sure you are very careful about who you give your heart to ya. Ya, make sure they deserve it.
@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@fransmonlot, Hi France? Thanks too for sharing your feeling. Yes, it is not easy to cure a broken heart, but time heals and helps move on to the next chapter of life.
@thelme55 (77081)
• Germany
29 Aug 22
Wow! Nice poem. Well done! I like it.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
7 Sep 22
@thelme55, thanks Thel
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
10 Sep 22
@thelme55 thanks it's Saturday now hehe.
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@thelme55 (77081)
• Germany
8 Sep 22
@cacay1 You are welcome. Enjoy your Friday.
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@sarik1 (7234)
26 Aug 22
It is nice poem .
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
26 Aug 22
@sarik1, thanks so much for the appreciation
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• India
26 Aug 22
You are multi talented
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@Butterfingers, Thank you, dear, I am just expressing my love's experience. Love is so beautiful but if cheated, it becomes like hell.
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@sica98 (2441)
• Malaysia
26 Aug 22
Is it me or does everyone know how to write a better poem than I di...
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
26 Aug 22
@sica98 I have written 678 poems published in the previous to those sites shut forever and haven't kept my published poems. My laptop was repaired and the tech didn't save my poems despite told.
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@sica98 (2441)
• Malaysia
26 Aug 22
@cacay1 Sorry to hear about.678 that's a lot..That's why can't rely everything on the digital way knowing that things like this might happen.You better saved this one as a backup or write it down somewhere.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
26 Aug 22
@sica98 I regret, I saved them in Dropbox but it can't be opened. I better saved them in my drive.
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@Ravi6300 (106)
26 Aug 22
It touched little bit.
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@cacay1 (83495)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
27 Aug 22
@Ravi6300, Yes, it could touch a heart that had experienced cheat. Love is beautiful if both are true and fair.
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