Share your personal poetry
By midnightuser
@midnightuser (252)
United States
December 10, 2006 7:16pm CST
I just saw someone else on here say post some poetry you enjoy. I think we shall all submit poetry we have written, share it critique and enjoy each others poetry
I call this one Tarot
The cards say
we have a chance
I want to have a chance for true love with only you,
The cards say,
your biggest challenge in this relationship
is ME.
I don't want to be your challenge.
I want to be the one that can solve all of your problems
I want to be the one that can make you smile
the one that can bring out your sunshine.
I do not want to bring you pain, frowns or thunder.
The cards say,
I am the fool
Sweet, naive
You are the experienced one,
with the never-ending past
leading me slowly along
into new endeavors and adventures.
Let us see what the cards have to offer us.
A pleasant future? a rocky road? or a cliff?
(c) Alicia Murray
20 responses
@shali3000 (742)
• Italy
11 Dec 06
This is one of my poems I wrote in Italian language and I have translated in English for sharing. Sorry if my English isn't really good :)
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The sweet smiled of a baby warms up the heart lifts the soul and puts out the sadness.
It is an incalculable gift that it is renewed
to every a tender caress,
to every bright full look of infinite love and gratitude. Thanks to you my sweetie for this precious gift,
thanks for the bright delight that you radiate to my firmament,
thanks to to be arrived to gladden mine small world, thanks to allow me of to look at all across your innocent eyes and laughing
Thanks for your baby's splendid smile
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@kstanley7 (1171)
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11 Dec 06
This is not a bad idea. so I'm gonna contribute by a poem.
This is for my dad god rest his soul.
Dad you have always tried to be there for me, but now you have life everlasting eternity.
I think about all the suffering you went through, and seeing you in pain made me cry.
There is so much that I want to tell you about, about your granddaughter you never knew about, its my fault really I should have not stayed away. But you will most probably see her in heaven, please look after her. The day you went to heaven of all days just had to be your birthday. I wonder why god decided to take you on that day of all days. In Time this will be nothing but a haze, but dad... You will always be my dad, my diamond, my shining star, and soon, we will be together. Looking over the sun, the stars and the moon.
@tigrashadow (1086)
• Australia
12 Dec 06
lovely poem and tribute to your dad...i just hope you dont hold guilt...im sure he loved you and knew you loved him no matter what happened
@midnightuser (252)
• United States
12 Dec 06
that's a very beautiful moving poem, thank you for sharing it, i know it's very personal for you as well. Thanks for saying i had a good idea, i thought so too
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@tigrashadow (1086)
• Australia
11 Dec 06
lovely poem......i actually added mine to another discussion that did ask your favourite poems...ill add a couple of mine...
Yours
The ocean is a huge expanse
Separating us from each other
Only matched in size
By the yearning in my heart
To be Yours
To be able to feel You
To submit to my love and desire for You
One day that ocean
Will become no more than a drop
The day You take me in Your arms forever
To own me completely
Tigrashadow
Copyright ©2006
For My Love
My heart aches when i don't see You
My soul cries every moment You are away
Talking to You shines light into my darkness
i want nothing more than to see Your smile every day
To feel Your strong arms protecting me
And to be able to give You all the love in my heart
To give You all of me
And hope that again we will never be apart
Please tell me yes or no
Do You want to take me as Yours?
And hopefully soon we can be together in person
To share all of life's joys and flaws.
Tigrashadow
Copyright ©2006
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@tigrashadow (1086)
• Australia
11 Dec 06
awww thank you so much....of course you can share them with him....i am honoured that someone finds them worthy
thank you
and thanks for this thread
@midnightuser (252)
• United States
11 Dec 06
I really like your poetry, thank you for sharing. would you mind if i shared them with my boyfriend? i would give you credit but they are very good poems. Thank you so much for your input.
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@shali3000 (742)
• Italy
11 Dec 06
I wrote this one in Italian language and I tried to translate it in English for sharing ...sorry if my English isn't good :)
The sweet smiled of a baby warms up the heart lifts the soul and puts out the sadness.
It is an incalculable gift that it is renewed
to every a tender caress,
to every bright full look of infinite love and gratitude. Thanks to you my sweetie for this precious gift,
thanks for the bright delight that you radiate to my firmament,
thanks to to be arrived to gladden mine small world,
thanks to allow me of to look at all across your innocent eyes and laughing
Thanks for your baby's splendid smile
@midnightuser (252)
• United States
12 Dec 06
if you like i could try and correct your english. I like what it's about so i could clean it up for you if you like. Thank you for sharing and translating into english
@whitefeahter1956 (70)
• United States
11 Dec 06
simplest things
The simplest thing was meeting you.
The hardest thingwas letting you go!
The simplest thing was dreaming about you
The hardest thing now is doing it alone and can't i adjust to you being gone or being alone.
The simplest thing was loving and making love to you
The hardsest things is seeing your side of the bed empty and thinking love with you will never be again!
The simplest thing was having you here to make memeories.that wouldn't disapear.
The hardest thing was you'd never be back to make knew ones!
The simplest thing was kissing you and feeling you.
The hardest thing you won't be here to kiss me anymore!
The simplest thing was hugging you when i wanted to you .
The hardest thing is my arms are empty not getting that hug back from you and taking the pain away from my heart and the whole i feel living there, thinking how will i go on without you.
The simplest thing was just hearing your voice so near.
The hardest thingwas watching them throw dirt on you and seeing your name written on a grave stone i feel so cold and alone.
the simplset thing is putting flowers where you lay.
The hardest thing is walking away.
MJB....11/18/2006
you can catch my work on my aol web page http://journals.aol.com/bigfatfries/peanut-butter-syrup-and-pancakes/
@tigrashadow (1086)
• Australia
12 Dec 06
all i have to say is....wow....
such a moving poem..thanks for sharing it
@khayman (34)
• Philippines
11 Dec 06
here's one of mine:
The Muse
Hearken unto me my muse, my angel
whose voice portends a touch of mystery.
Leave me not hapless in the dust.
For darkness taketh me if unto my ears thy voice be lost.
Many a day i have spent in longing for thee.
To see thee with thy radiant eyes.
But it will suffice if only a glimpse could be spared
of you, whose beauty only the moon can compare.
Wither thou goest I would go.
So smile, bright star, and shine with light unfaltering.
Would I were steadfast as thy light,
not in lone splendor hung aloft the night.
Woe for repose, abeyance, my only respite.
Would I were for ever aslumber..
Would I were for ever asleep..
For only in sleep are my thoughts free of thee.
@midnightuser (252)
• United States
11 Dec 06
wow, i really like the words you used throughout this poem and how you explain yourself, it's a beautiful poem. the wither thou goest part seems not to fit in my opinion im sorry if you weren't looking for any feedback. It was a lovely read, thank you for sharing with me.
@perugu (5279)
• India
11 Dec 06
hi,Parrot and Rabbit
live as my pets
parrot eat guava
Rabbit eat carrot
play like anything
we go to playground.....
@icequeen (2840)
• Canada
11 Dec 06
Snow White Dove
Snow-white dove, suspended in the light spring air.
The sun glistens off your pure white feathers.
You are the purest form of nature from our maker.
You fly high above the cathedral in this square.
You perch to rest on the highest point.
The sky is your backdrop that illuminates your beauty.
Snow-white dove, you carry beauty.
@midnightuser (252)
• United States
11 Dec 06
very nice, thank you for sharing your imagery and thoughts with us.
@Furrukh (701)
• Pakistan
15 Dec 06
ok i've got another poem
When my feeling is at Cross,
And u cross my mind,
I know, I can grin and bear it,
When a happy day comes,
You're always the one,
That I want to share it,
you are my Love for all seasons,
You are my Love for all reasons,
You are so kind,
You are so near,
I want to know if it is true?
My life has become richer,
Because I have found you,
The meaning of True Love!
Let this Friendship grow,
Forever, and Forever.
From the depth of your heart,
With the warmth of Your Love
@ranikrishnan (1683)
• India
11 Dec 06
beauty it is to bloom,
to live and share without much gloom,
until dawn or yonder moon,
i will be here come and kiss me soon.
@sj_chaudhry (1537)
• Canada
12 Dec 06
It seems as time goes on
I love you much each day
so much passion and tenderness
As my words can ever say..!!
(SJ)
@gokufatherofgohan (72)
• United States
11 Dec 06
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.
I thought that you’d be there
But I was wrong
I thought that you cared
But I was wrong
You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.
@deshabhishek007 (919)
• India
15 Dec 06
We Real Cool
by Gwendolyn Brooks
THE POOL PLAYERS.
SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL.
We real cool. We
Left school. We
Lurk late. We
Strike straight. We
Sing sin. We
Thin gin. We
Jazz June. We
Die soon.
@hiddenheartin (300)
• India
11 Dec 06
many poetry i read ,, many poetry i heard,, the best of few and that's u..
@tigrashadow (1086)
• Australia
11 Dec 06
is it just me or did all the extra responses just disappear?
@margaretz (78)
• United Arab Emirates
11 Dec 06
There is one of my creations....
FALLING IN LOVE…
You know you are in Love…
When you see yourself smiling all day unconsciously….
When things you disliked, starts getting your appreciations….
When you wait for the first ray of sun to see him again….
When you start taking hour to dress up and get ready….
When you keep looking at the phone at intervals, to hear his voice….
When you say you don’t mind him talking with other girls but actually boils inside at heart when he does….
When your heart skips a beat when he touches you by mistake…
When picking an outfit for a jog takes hours….
When you keep looking into the mirror for long hours….
When you heart rate increases as stands next to you….
When you cannot stop talking to him on phone for hours….
When you start eating food you never liked before, with him….
When you get up in middle of the night, dreaming of him….
When you feel that life is so perfect and that you are walking in the clouds….
When you would not mind to go an extra mile for him….
Love is when you realize that....
You want to spend the rest of your life caring for him….
You want to be near him no matter what….
You want to share both your happiness and worries with him….
You want to be the mother for his children…
AND WHEN YOU WOULD NOT MIND WALKING AROUND THE WORLD BESIDE HIM, WITH HIS STRONG ARMS AROUND YOU….
Margaret Z
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@kool_dude (27)
• India
11 Dec 06
I called the sun and he answered me
I called the moon and she treasured me
I called the stars and they cried for me
When I called your name only silence came back to me.
I called the earth and she befriended me
I called the sky and she watched over me.
I called the seas and they refreshed me.
When I whispered your name only silence came back to me.
I called the wind and he carried me
I called the fire and he lit for me
I called the animals and they sang for me
When I spoke your name only silence came back to me.
I’ve seen you pass with my very eyes
I’ve seen you smile and my heart just sighs
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