Community Poem - easy - add a line or two!
@strawberrymudd (330)
United States
January 14, 2007 2:29pm CST
I was an RA at college last year, and I worked at camp for a few years prior, so I came up with all sorts of crazy "community games." This one is not really my original idea, but I like it nonetheless, and I know it can be fun, zany, crazy, and thought provoking. So I'm going to give it a try here.
What you need to do is respond to the discussion with two lines of poetry. They don't have to make perfect sense, but you want the first line you write to rhyme with the LAST line of the person before you. The second line can rhyme, but it doesn't have to. I'll start with:
Winter is upon us once again,
and with the cold weather comes many long days
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7 responses
@sullengrave (81)
• United States
18 Jan 07
lend me your hands
for warmth and joy
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@jfglassworks (128)
• United States
14 Jan 07
as we walk through the snow
watching the sun's rays play
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@ladybugweber (2)
• United States
16 Jan 07
it's too bad that the cold brings lots phlegm.
Regardless of the outside temp
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@purplemagestar (2)
• United States
18 Jan 07
Only one has to wait until may, to see the full glory of winters sleep. Too fully become aware of the beauty within you, and your heart once again starts to mend.
@gittabest (1946)
• Iceland
14 Jan 07
many long days and so many ways,
I don't know how I can get this place