Poem: Mind Storm
By grayangel
@grayangel (274)
United States
January 21, 2007 2:51pm CST
Please take not this is my work I did not copy it form any were. ^_^ Please Enjoy:
Like a thunder storm my mind is brewing.
Evil thoughts fill up my conscious.
Fire Burns deep within my soul
Burn deep, almost consuming my heart,
A fragile heart, shatters on the ground.
Never to resume is original shape again...
The body is tattered and hurt,
The soul shrinking into a in viewable dot.
Insanity slowly setting in.
The calming rain come in a form of a pill.
Take it 3 times a day...
To null the storm, the fire...
To null the Pain.
Till the effect were off.
What do think?
3 responses
@grayangel (274)
• United States
21 Jan 07
That you some people have said I have a one of a kind way of writing this.
@HighPriestess (739)
• Melbourne, Florida
21 Jan 07
Very good description of the battle going on within you. I do hope you find peace.
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@grayangel (274)
• United States
21 Jan 07
Thank you for you response. I tried to make it thought provoking.
