i love you...

Philippines
March 15, 2007 4:52am CST
We are friends, don't you see I wanna be more than that? I want more than just a "Hi!" every once in a while. I want more. I want to know that i'm yours and you are mine. I want to know that if i come to you, you'll be there for me, that you'll listen to my problems, my hopes, my dreams. I want to know that no matter what you'll never leave me, and that you'll love me. I want to have your arms around me, and have you whispering sweet things in my ear. I want to be able to laugh and cry, to share the good and the bad times. I want to be able to call you and have you be there for me. I want you to be closer than my best friend. I want all of these things. But there's only one thing I want and need... YOU.
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5 responses
mizrak07
@mizrak07 (557)
• Philippines
15 Mar 07
You're in-love with your bestfriend and you can't tell him / her right? That's why you posted it all here to express yourself
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faye_co
@faye_co (38)
• Philippines
16 Mar 07
Ahmm.. kind of.. but i don't think he would accept this proposal. It's alright with me, i'm not waiting for his answer anyway. I'm just letting him know.
devildinesh
@devildinesh (183)
• India
15 Mar 07
Excellent dramatic proposal.I hope when your love see this discussion he/she will accept your proposal with a brightest smile on his/her face.I may ask you to give me more versus like these for my proposal.Best of Luck!!!!
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faye_co
@faye_co (38)
• Philippines
16 Mar 07
Thanks.. but i think if you're going to propose to a girl it's much better if it's your own words 'coz that would really comes from your heart, but i would be willing to help you though.
rocky777
@rocky777 (353)
• India
15 Mar 07
I'd love to be friends with you, you write great verse! Hope we can co-exist together on planet Earth. Besides which I do hope you will treat me to some more poems.... More when you add me as a friend!
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faye_co
@faye_co (38)
• Philippines
16 Mar 07
Sure I would love to.. Thanks.
garyeye
@garyeye (202)
• Philippines
15 Mar 07
As much as I would like to, I can't be more to you and anyone else for that matter. But I'll tell you there is someone who meets your demands and more his name is J.C. and He knows you and had been waiting for you. You can't see Him but He sees you every moment of your life. I'll tell you, "He loves you more than you'll ever know. He is love itself, He sacrificed his life for you a long time ago, so that when you meet Him; you'll know that it's Him that you're looking for. You will not be disappointed with Him;cause when you love him back, he will give you immeasurably more than you can imagine. What I say is true and you can investigate it for your self if it's true. He already written His will for you and you can find it in the book He entitled the Bible.
humpicas
@humpicas (82)
• United States
15 Mar 07
Haha if there was a chance of it happening, it already would have and you wouldn't be drowning in cheesy adolescent poetry like this.
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