ArmyWifeJessica
@ArmyWifeJessica (34)
United States • Age 54
Joined myLot 17 years ago
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twilight_75
@twilight_75 (479)
31 Oct 07
My partner is due to do a tour in afganistan, with christmas coming up i want to get him something specail. Any ideas?
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abi1005
@abi1005 (194)
• Philippines
23 Oct 07
to start..here's my piece...feel free to share yours.. :)
you came..
..i smile
you smile..
..i laugh
you cry..
..i mourn
and then you left..
..i die
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Aurone
@Aurone (4755)
• United States
13 Oct 07
So I am home alone this weekend because my husband's parents bought a plane ticket for him to visit and didn't ask me to come along. I feel kind of hurt that they would ask my husband to come and completely ignore me, I wasn't...
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abi1005
@abi1005 (194)
• Philippines
23 Oct 07
to start..here's my piece...feel free to share yours.. :)
you came..
..i smile
you smile..
..i laugh
you cry..
..i mourn
and then you left..
..i die
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ArmyWifeJessica You have lots of strong emotion in that short piece. Nice work! It is on the dark/depressing side, but that's okay! I like the brevity of it. Few words with a bigger punch. I'd say that you could easily pull more from this work.
The trick about poetry,...
3 Nov 07
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