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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 25 May 16

She asked him if he thought she was a person to him. She asked him if he thought she had a brain. She asked him if he thought she had a heart that had feelings. She told him she is not a doll that he can seek out just for his...

love

men

hurt

feminism

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Teep11 There's the problem right there. Boy mentality from men. Perhaps she will find the right one if she waits.

26 May 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 24 Mar 16

That queasy sick feeling strengthens at dark. I feel hopeless more and more as the sun light dissipates. I knew it was going to happen, just didn't want to believe it to be true. I have only seen you twice in a month, yet you...

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joy nice read.. i see hope though even if you say you'd be a fool to believe.

26 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 24 Mar 16

That queasy sick feeling strengthens at dark. I feel hopeless more and more as the sun light dissipates. I knew it was going to happen, just didn't want to believe it to be true. I have only seen you twice in a month, yet you...

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aayyush rajalinga Mystical romance I liked the blend of Love being Intricately pinned up with Nature as you yearn for that loved one nature as a mother yearns from us to keep it clean and beautiful

26 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 24 Mar 16

That queasy sick feeling strengthens at dark. I feel hopeless more and more as the sun light dissipates. I knew it was going to happen, just didn't want to believe it to be true. I have only seen you twice in a month, yet you...

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YoghurtGal This is so melancholic and it somehow reflects how I feel at the moment. Hoping for a lost love to return. Very beautiful words mate.

26 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 7 Mar 16

The tears ran down her face as she listened to the words come through the phone. "He is telling everyone your business along with telling people he is sleeping with you!", she held her breath as her friend kept rolling on about...

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Francesca Etheart Wow she is one tough cookie! I understand her anger. Anybody would've gotten angry if someone disrespected them. The only difference is I would've gone about solving the issue a whole different way. As I'm not a violent person I would found a different way to...

8 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 7 Mar 16

The tears ran down her face as she listened to the words come through the phone. "He is telling everyone your business along with telling people he is sleeping with you!", she held her breath as her friend kept rolling on about...

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O'Kennedy I am sure that would have made her feel good. Although it doesn't ix what he did but good for her.

7 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 7 Mar 16

The tears ran down her face as she listened to the words come through the phone. "He is telling everyone your business along with telling people he is sleeping with you!", she held her breath as her friend kept rolling on about...

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DW Davis She went a little easy on him, didn't she. I liked the story, especially the way she marked him as an SOB with his own cigarette. Word would get around to avoid the buy with the burn scar on his cheek.

7 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 27 Feb 16

I peeked out the window to see where you parked. As you opened your car door I hurried over to unlock my back door. I leaned on the door jam, waiting for you. It was dark because the light bulb was blown out over the back patio,...

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Stacey I peaked out the window to see where you parked. This (looking out the window, or taking a small glance at anything) is spelled, "peeked". "Peaked" is like a "Peaked roof".

5 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 23 Feb 16

Someone close to me could have died. I could be in terrible condition from an accident. I'm fully aware of the situation being mild when comparing, but it is my life. It hurts the most that I have to completely disown...

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Arthur Chappell sounds like you are going through hell - hope things improve - not all men are that bad, and I hope I never treat anyone so badly as you have been treated

5 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 27 Feb 16

I peeked out the window to see where you parked. As you opened your car door I hurried over to unlock my back door. I leaned on the door jam, waiting for you. It was dark because the light bulb was blown out over the back patio,...

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inertia4 This is a romantic writing. I think it would have been better made as a poem. But, it is good.

3 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 23 Feb 16

Someone close to me could have died. I could be in terrible condition from an accident. I'm fully aware of the situation being mild when comparing, but it is my life. It hurts the most that I have to completely disown...

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inertia4 Well, it is a two way street. I had a similar situation like you. But I was taken for everything. So, not all men are bad. Just like all women aren't bad. I feel for you and your situation. I agree, giving someone your all, they do take advantage. We are...

3 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 23 Feb 16

Someone close to me could have died. I could be in terrible condition from an accident. I'm fully aware of the situation being mild when comparing, but it is my life. It hurts the most that I have to completely disown...

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Jabo You need to tell us a bit more if you want us to discuss this with you

3 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 29 Feb 16

You sat on my couch again under the white fairy lights hung on the wall. They illuminated the yellow paint as the light escaped from under the Christmas stockings hung on the wall. I stared into your dark eyes, you seemed more...

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MandaLee wow. I love the metaphor!

3 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 29 Feb 16

You sat on my couch again under the white fairy lights hung on the wall. They illuminated the yellow paint as the light escaped from under the Christmas stockings hung on the wall. I stared into your dark eyes, you seemed more...

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inertia4 This was a good read. Setting up the romantic scene. Slightly erotic, which I think is very cool as well.

3 Mar 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 29 Feb 16

You sat on my couch again under the white fairy lights hung on the wall. They illuminated the yellow paint as the light escaped from under the Christmas stockings hung on the wall. I stared into your dark eyes, you seemed more...

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Sherrye Barrow Intense...captures the reader and is thought provoking.

1 Mar 16

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Steve West @zebra2222 (5268) • United States 28 Feb 16

You complain about the weather. You complain about the food. You complain about your job. You're in a complaining mood. You complain about your mother. You complain about your dad. Please quit your complaining. You are making me...

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Sheena Aris @Islandtulip (88) • Jamaica 8 Feb 16

What are some of the things you would are wouldn't do to help the person your in love? Just here watching some Gossip Girl on Netflix where Blair made the choice to sleep with Chucks uncle to get his hotel back. Even though she...

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 29 Feb 16

You sat on my couch again under the white fairy lights hung on the wall. They illuminated the yellow paint as the light escaped from under the Christmas stockings hung on the wall. I stared into your dark eyes, you seemed more...

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divi Expectations should be in limits if we desired more and more then possiblity of non occurrence will hurt us. It is very true our expectations will never end . so just we should be in habbit to be happy with that whatever we have in present nor think or expect...

29 Feb 16

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Lisa Paolini @BarefootWriter (18) • Epping, New Hampshire 27 Feb 16

I peeked out the window to see where you parked. As you opened your car door I hurried over to unlock my back door. I leaned on the door jam, waiting for you. It was dark because the light bulb was blown out over the back patio,...

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Alfredo Rossi very romantic.But not for me.Unless they are a gay couple But the straights will loved it.Saludos

28 Feb 16

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