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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 If you want to self-publish you can use Lulu or CreateSpace. I always used lulu to publish my books. It's free to publish with them, if you do everything yourself. You can always pay someone to do it for you. They offer publishing services.

18 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 Ever thought of doing a book?

18 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

I thought I was a giant in this world but I realized I’m much more. When I feel this trigger squeeze, I hear the blast in the heart of a lion’s roar. The power in this fingertip, I feel the rush in my core. Take other lives until...

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Alvin Jenn @JordnP123 What is the retire age in military? Mind to share any crazy things you have done in your camp? Your friends and family will be missed you so much since you are always away from home. You cannot watch your child every moment they grow up.

17 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

I thought I was a giant in this world but I realized I’m much more. When I feel this trigger squeeze, I hear the blast in the heart of a lion’s roar. The power in this fingertip, I feel the rush in my core. Take other lives until...

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Alvin Jenn @JordnP123 Do anything? How many years to finish your duty or you plan to work as full time?

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 Do you write a lot of poems?

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 No apologies needed. Was just wondering why you used them... 'cause it seemed weird that you had them.

17 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 Why the ?????

17 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Hope @JordnP123

15 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 I started when I was in high school or maybe even junior high. I've actually published a number of poetry books. :) Published my latest book last month. It's my 11th book so far. But not all my books are poetry books. I have a novel, a poetic tale,...

15 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Mugure Karen Wanjiru @JordnP123 I will

15 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Hope @JordnP123 Great! I hope I spot it when you do.

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Lena Kovadlo @JordnP123 You're welcome! It's nice to meet another poet on here.

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Hope @JordnP123 The poetry is nice. Is it a continuing story?

14 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Alfredo Rossi @JordnP123 thank you.Have not seen it yet.Will

14 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Alfredo Rossi @JordnP123 Good for you.

14 Dec 18

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