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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Jordan Payne @lovebuglena I actually have thought about it but I don’t really know how to do it

18 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 18 Dec 18

Left my mama on that day. Tears in her eyes, no words to say. Signed my name on the dotted line. Sorry mama this life is mine. Mama, mama it’s okay. I’m gonna be home on Christmas Day. Saddest day of my life. I kissed my son, I...

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Jordan Payne I don’t want it to be sad. I just want the lives of soldiers to be recognized

18 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

I thought I was a giant in this world but I realized I’m much more. When I feel this trigger squeeze, I hear the blast in the heart of a lion’s roar. The power in this fingertip, I feel the rush in my core. Take other lives until...

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Jordan Payne @Acefun I’m gonna go until I retire

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Jordan Payne @lovebuglena yes I have alooot more poems

17 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Jordan Payne @lovebuglena they were hearts but the keyboard changed them to question marks I’m sorry

17 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

Every time I see you cry my soul sheds a tear. I feel your pain like I was the one stabbed in the heart with a spear. Gorgeous on the outside, but on the inside, you're scarred to Hell. Trust me things are gonna get better even...

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Jordan Payne Thank you so much!! I always love your reactions to my poems????

17 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 17 Dec 18

I thought I was a giant in this world but I realized I’m much more. When I feel this trigger squeeze, I hear the blast in the heart of a lion’s roar. The power in this fingertip, I feel the rush in my core. Take other lives until...

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Jordan Payne Yes I am a real U.S. army soldier and it’s not all that bad. You have your brothers and sisters by your side and they make you invincible and you feel like you can do anything

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I grew up in a deep gutter. Warm-hearted boy with an intense stutter. Put everyone's feelings above my own. Didn't pursue my own desires, that's why I'm so alone. Never get to show what my heart exposes. I hope I find love...

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Jordan Payne Thank you that means alot ??

17 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Jordan Payne Thank you:))!! And yes that’s absolutely true

15 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Jordan Payne I posted two of them already please check them out

15 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Jordan Payne @1hopefulman Thank you!! You make me feel good about my poetry and the stories that they tell

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Jordan Payne @lovebuglena ohh you’re a poet too! That’s cool!! I started writing poems since I was about 5 years old I’m 18 right now When did you start? I wanna find a way to make money with my poetry. Do you have any ideas?

14 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Jordan Payne @1hopefulman Yes it is a continuing story I’m making a part 2

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Jordan Payne Yes that’s the name of the poem I just decided to put the date as the title because it gets people wondering what the date means or what happened on that day And thank you so much that means alot

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

He said he loved her without hesitation. If you could only see the tears fall from her foolish heart. This world only filled his life with agitation. And it finally broke them apart. In her eyes he was a saint, he's her savior....

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Jordan Payne Oh no I t’s a story that I made up and the woman will find love again That’s in another poem that I wrote Every poem is a story Please let people know about my poetry thanks

14 Dec 18

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Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Jordan Payne Thank you I posted one right now

14 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Jordan Payne Thank you I posted one right now

14 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Jordan Payne Would you like to read one rn?

14 Dec 18

Jordan Payne @JordnP123 (28) 14 Dec 18

I use poetry to express how I’m feeling in my heart and to make people’s days when they read them and a smile appears on their faces Does anyone wanna take some time out of their day and read some? I can answer any questions that...

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Jordan Payne Would you like to read one?

14 Dec 18

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