Poem with my Soulmate

@reti_9 (386)
Philippines
February 9, 2022 4:23am CST
Hello everyone. Hope you will enjoy this poem that we created it, with my soulmate/boyfriend, and it comes from our hearts and its our point of view. Forevermore Though distance may be far, My eyes laid sight on a star. Shining brighter than before, She’ll be loved forevermore. In he stepped into my world, Plans and thoughts unfurled. For brighter moments bound For the future when he’s around Her eyes asked for comfort, So I gave her my best effort. Found solutions quick at last, Oh How I fell in love so fast. I’ll choose him in this life, So I can be his happy wife. My castle in the sky is him Gives me peace his eyes that shim. Written in Collaboration with Reti and Nick (C) copyright 2022 Nick Nguyen and Reti Boncales "Original Content" You'll see me more now in Mylot since my boyfriend encouraged me to write a poem with him since last year, as I convinced him to join here with me and I'm happy that he did. To you my Dearest Nick I'm happy you joined here and welcome to Mylot. No more long dramas in here since you are fully aware what I'm going to say to you. I love you always and forever babe. Feel free to comment what do you think guys?
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@Shavkat (139937)
• Philippines
9 Feb 22
I hope I could meet my lifetime partner.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
Don't worry it will come to you soon.
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@Shavkat (139937)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
@reti_9 Indeed. I am not looking for her, she will come at a perfect time and place.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
@Shavkat like the situation of me and Nick we just found each other in perfect time.
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@sharonelton (28882)
• Lichfield, England
9 Feb 22
Beautiful poem. Your love story is being shared all over MyLot.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
9 Feb 22
Thank you. We are happy to share our story here in Mylot. We agreed to post it here to share some our journey in life that I will cherish this for a lifetime experience.
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@sharonelton (28882)
• Lichfield, England
9 Feb 22
@reti_9 Thank you very much for doing so. It's not everyone who would want their love lives to be broadcast like this. You are very brave and we can see how much you love each other.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
9 Feb 22
@sharonelton we just dare to each other what to do, so in a future we can face so much stronger than ever before. I think we can post some kind poems since he is too good with that one.
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@RebeccasFarm (89873)
• Arvada, Colorado
9 Feb 22
This is beautiful I also subbed to your boyfriend YouTube You are a great couple I wish you happiness forever
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• Arvada, Colorado
10 Feb 22
@reti_9 Welcome
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for subscribing Nick's YouTube its means a lot to him
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@Kandae11 (55035)
9 Feb 22
Its nice to see young love and commitment. Continue to bloom.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
Thank you so much For sure it will continue.
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• Nairobi, Kenya
9 Feb 22
Nice poem.
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• Nairobi, Kenya
10 Feb 22
@reti_9 I did . You are welcomed
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
Thank you. Happy you enjoyed it.
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• United States
10 Feb 22
Awww Babe? I'm so happy you brought me here to Mylot. I'm also happy to have encouraged you to just let your thoughts flow, and this is what has come of it. A Masterpiece of a Poem. I love you Babe. Happy 3 months together.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
Same here I'm so happy you're here. I love you too! Happy 3 months to us babe!!
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
@Middlepoet20 I can say same thing to you babe.
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• United States
10 Feb 22
@reti_9 YAY!! You mean the world to me. And you deserve the world.
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@sarik1 (7234)
10 Feb 22
It is nice and lovely poem.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
Thank you so much. I'm happy you enjoyed it.
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