Poem with my Soulmate
@reti_9 (386)
Philippines
February 9, 2022 4:23am CST
Hello everyone. Hope you will enjoy this poem that we created it, with my soulmate/boyfriend, and it comes from our hearts and its our point of view.
Forevermore
Though distance may be far,
My eyes laid sight on a star.
Shining brighter than before,
She’ll be loved forevermore.
In he stepped into my world,
Plans and thoughts unfurled.
For brighter moments bound
For the future when he’s around
Her eyes asked for comfort,
So I gave her my best effort.
Found solutions quick at last,
Oh How I fell in love so fast.
I’ll choose him in this life,
So I can be his happy wife.
My castle in the sky is him
Gives me peace his eyes that shim.
Written in Collaboration with Reti and Nick
(C) copyright 2022 Nick Nguyen and Reti Boncales
"Original Content"
You'll see me more now in Mylot since my boyfriend encouraged me to write a poem with him since last year, as I convinced him to join here with me and I'm happy that he did.
To you my Dearest Nick I'm happy you joined here and welcome to Mylot. No more long dramas in here since you are fully aware what I'm going to say to you. I love you always and forever babe.
Feel free to comment what do you think guys?
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7 responses
@sharonelton (28882)
• Lichfield, England
9 Feb 22
Beautiful poem. Your love story is being shared all over MyLot.
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@sharonelton (28882)
• Lichfield, England
9 Feb 22
@reti_9 Thank you very much for doing so. It's not everyone who would want their love lives to be broadcast like this. You are very brave and we can see how much you love each other.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
9 Feb 22
@sharonelton we just dare to each other what to do, so in a future we can face so much stronger than ever before. I think we can post some kind poems since he is too good with that one.
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@RebeccasFarm (89873)
• Arvada, Colorado
9 Feb 22
This is beautiful
I also subbed to your boyfriend YouTube
You are a great couple
I wish you happiness forever
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@mildredtabitha (16126)
• Nairobi, Kenya
10 Feb 22
@reti_9 I did . You are welcomed
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@Middlepoet20 (120)
• United States
10 Feb 22
Awww Babe? I'm so happy you brought me here to Mylot. I'm also happy to have encouraged you to just let your thoughts flow, and this is what has come of it. A Masterpiece of a Poem. I love you Babe. Happy 3 months together.
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@reti_9 (386)
• Philippines
10 Feb 22
@Middlepoet20 I can say same thing to you babe.
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@Middlepoet20 (120)
• United States
10 Feb 22
@reti_9 YAY!! You mean the world to me. And you deserve the world.
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